Loved this story, amazing job!! This was so well written, and I enjoyed every bit of it. Will definitely read more works by you!
Concerning your political comments in your authors notes in chapter 9.
a)you are from Sweden, don't comment on the laws of a country you aren't a citizen of.
b)I am not rich nor am I a man and I own 3 rifles and 1 handgun, and no I don't get hard for them, I use them for hunting and personal defense since I live 45 minutes from the nearest law enforcement.
c)I assume this was comment was made in response to the Orlando Night Club shooting. A point that should be made here is that gun laws are meant to keep guns out of the hands of current criminals, which he was not, and had anyone in that club had a conceal carry permit and a gun on them, it would have ended a lot sooner than it did.
d)I come to this site to lose myself in a fantasy, I really don't want nor need to read your insulting comments on laws which have nothing to do with you. And for you to have posted the comment in such an insulting way, is truly shame worthy.
Look I get it, what happened in Orlando was horrible, and I would have absolutely no problem with you expressing your grief and condolences concerning the tragedy itself, but to equate this all out to a gun control issue, and to assume only rich white men would have a reason to carry a gun is both ignorant and insulting. And what is more insulting is the fact that you aren't even American and are making these comments.
I am glad that keeping guns out of the hands of the Swedish general population works so well over there, but it will never work here. Because no matter how stiff the penalty, there will always be people who will provide guns to those wanting to commit violent acts (for whatever reason), and to take guns out of the hands of good law abiding citizens is just going to make things worse. Try looking up incidents of gun crimes that were resolved because someone had a gun and put a stop to the incident, vs incidents where no one but the criminal did. You will find in each case the casualties were a heck of a lot less.I can almost guarantee that had someone else had a gun that night it would have ended a lot sooner and with way fewer people getting hurt or dead.
Regardless, I will no longer be reading your stories, which is a shame because you are a talented writer. Next time maybe you will keep you political opinions concerning other countries to yourself or state them way more politely.
Awesome to see this story still going. I had been reading it a while ago and had fallen off it, nice to check back and find a lot of chapters to read.
I still want hermione to become pregnant. I know you said you wouldn't do that because you have other stories with her having a child. But those ones involved harry being dead or her enemy. So at least in this one it would be a different dynamic and I don't want her pregnant yet per say. Just at the end when Voldemort either wins or dies. :p
i want hermione to be pregnant, mainly cus that would damper everyone's plans. But also I just want to see her pissed at him and to him to also be pissed cus well that would make my day.
Really really enjoying this so far! I can't wait for the next update! x
It was interesting to see how you had Fred and George interact with Voldemort in the last couple of chapters. I liked how you showed that humor can be an effective response to tyranny. Looking forward to finding out who cursed Hermione. I hope she'll be fine.
I get so excited every time this updates. I look forwards to the point where there is more interactions between Herm and Vold. I like the pacing you have going.
Awesome as always
Great story