I don't mind if you speed it up a bit. I think there is a happy medium where you could have some time gaps and just gloss over some things that happened and spend more time and detail on the big things.
I'm curious is Snape will tell the Malfoys himself about what has happened. I've never known whether Dumbledore is good or bad he fits both so well because of his manipulations and his denial of knowledge about situations I feel he Knew more about. Especially because they include children.
Im shocked Bella got out of her room. And of course she would find the diary. I feel it made perfect sense that she had that connection with the diary. It's intrigued me where you will go with this plot twist.
I must admit I'm hoping Draco or both Harry and Draco will be able to break the mind control and protect themselves from future attacks. Then they don't have to deal with more manipulative adults but I'm torn because I don't want Dumbledore to be right in saying to leave the situation alone and by ignoring it it will fix itself.
I live in suspense til you post again.
Again I must say, I love this story! It's become one of the stories I contemplate when I have free time. Your pacing is something I've been concerned with. If you keep up the everyday in detail pace you've been doing, the story will take forever for you to tell. However, the detail you provide is important. This chapter was lovely. We got the info we needed in a fluid form, but time has been passing. I can't wait to read more!
My only real issue with this story. Is that for 6 year olds they are way too intelligent and have in my opinion an incredibly unrealistic vocabulary and thought process
Poor Draco, even Harry's magic couldn't fix the mind fuck Quirrell did on him. Hopefully Harry can convince him it was Quirrell they were watching not Snape.
I loved the werewolf scene!! That was such a rush! And they now have a loyal we're on their side not only in human form but in wolf too!
And the plot thickens. Things are heating up again people! Although poor Draco somehow had his mind breached ! I Feel like it's just one more violation for the poor boy and now he suspects Snape!!!! Holy plot twist Batman!!
I'm so excited! I about went crazy when you went two weeks without updating (although I think I managed to miss a chapter so it's probably my fault, lol). This story had me absolutely hooked. I love how you manipulate the characters into this flowing plotline, its thrilling to watch! I cant wait for the next chapter!
Thank you for another wonderful chapter. Glad to see you back. I hope you're staying safe. I know there are a number of storms hitting the states and the Caribbean. You have my thoughts and good wishes.
I really love the explanation of the excess magic being absorbed by Hogworts. That made so much sense. Maybe it will even make Hogworts herself more protective of the boys since she now shares some of their magic. I'm sure her wards are back up to 100% now!! lol.
Awww they're getting more intimate. I wonder how they will explain away the power surge? I mean, wouldn't the adults in the whole castle feel it? The students too but they may not know what it was.
I wonder if Snape will join Harry's side for the chance to remove the dark mark?
Can't wait to see what comes next!
Great chapter update.
What got up Snape's nose?
I hope they mange to get on top of the bullies both in Griffindor and in Slytherin.
How is Draco going to cope now Harry has been hurt? - look out any students who open their mouth and say the wrong thing.