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March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you started writing this story again! I have been following you for forever and literally cried tears of joy when I saw that there was a chapter update. To come here and find out there were 5 chapters waiting for me - bliss! You've reworked this story wonderfully and I'm really liking what you've done with the story. I can't wait to read more. Keep writing!
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March 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter. I like the idea of Draco seeking out Brendan for some kind of guidance, but maybe after being on the streets for a bit. I don't think he would trust him unless necessary, but the streets lack control due to weather, food, the like.
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March 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They're free :D
I'd like to see them try to survive by themselves on the streets. For a while at least
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think that it should be half and half one part they should be in a club the next parts are independent but really it's up to you I think both story lines are really good idea and I can't wait to see which one gets chosenthank you for continuing this storyline I really appreciate it it is amazing
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Both ideas have merit, it's so difficult to choose one. I'd like to say both, but if I had to pick only one, I'd say they escape and live on the streets
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Let them escape on their own please!!! I think that way we'll get to see Draco protecting Harry more maybe. Lol ! Great chap! I definitely appreciated the chapter warnings. Thanks :D
Looking forward to more! Btw I love Draco's possessiveness and protectiveness. ^^
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February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I like the story. I'm nt sure about the abide parts since I skip over them(that's just me) but I think you should put warnings at the begging of each chap because those are really graphic! From the few words I've glimpsed. Also, the scene with Draco and Harry should also have a warning cuz that completely threw me for a loop. I guess it's so readers can know what they are getting into.
As I said before I rly like the story despite skipping those parts. Their interactions are rly realistic.
Hope to see more soon. :)
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February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was having a massive case of deja vu until I went back and read the A/N at the beginning (serves me right for skipping it). I'm glad you're continuing with the story :)
No, I don't think it's too graphic (if there is such a thing! Lol)
I can't wait to see what happens to Harry and Draco. Are they found and taken to Hogwarts? Why was Draco living at the orphanage anyway?
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February 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Plz continue it! This chap made me tear up. So much pain:(. Hope they get out of there soon.
Looking forward to more.
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February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It is really good I am interested in were this go but it kinda scary me lol I feel sorry for Draco and I am wondering what happened to harry and I am wondering if there still wizard and if they will still go to hogwarts as they are quite mentally unstable Please keep on writing