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for Freedom Bound in Chains

by TaintedSensibly

person DinaTheCat
schedule April 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
D': Why would you do this?! It's so sad :'(
person happybunny
schedule April 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
love this story, glad you were able to push through on the chapter, despite how uncomfortable it made you! Can't wait for the next ch
person emmainthealps
schedule April 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So that was really full on. But worth the wait for it also. It's kind of hard to keep remembering that they are so young!! It's going to be interesting to see where the boys will go next. Are they going to learn to read? Are the Wizards looking for them at all? Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person serpensprincess
schedule April 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic. This chapter just made me cry out with pain and sorrow for Draco and Harry. Now I'm eager to read what Draco does next, and what happens to them. I hope they finally find some peace somewhere. Keep up amazing work.
schedule April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can see why. You did a good job of portraying the horror that these poor children have to face. I know we don't like to think of it but this actually happens to kids somewhere everyday. I like that Draco had the ability to try and shield Harry as much as he could. Now to try and find some place safe for them. They need to get out of the city. Can't wait to read more.
person Qtness.Quill
schedule April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good story-- you made me stay up until 2 last night after I stumbled upon it! Been thinking about it all day. I just gotta ask, is the hideous orange sweatshirt with a bird on it-- that Draco procures for Harry-- by any chance from Hooters? I gotsta know! (I think it would be cute that they would have an owl symbol, for 2 unknowing wizards) Looking forward to updates....
person DinaTheCat
schedule April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The darkest chapter so far - poor Harry :( Excellently written, though. It kinda sucks that they couldn't have been safe and happy for a little while longer, but I would be much more annoyed if you ended suddenly with "and they lived happily ever after".
schedule April 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! Keep it up
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Heyy....I'm really sorry but I won't be able o give proper feedback. I skipped through the majority as I really couldn't take it.(I thought I could). Bare in mind that even the less graphical torture scenes I skipped so maybe one of the other readers will be able to give you proper feedback. I did read the part where Draco went crazy though and that was perfectly done. Hoping next chap is a little more bonding and less torture? Please???
schedule March 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy day! Thanks so much for another great chapter! The progression is coming along nicely and I love the relationship between our two boys - I find myself being a bit pessimistic though wondering what our esteemed savior wants from these 2 boys. Is it really too good to be true or am I too much of a cynic. Lol. Keep up the good work. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!