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Erm... I feel really bad that I like this. It is horrifying and sick and completely relatable at one and the same time. Good job! (And yes, the chapter that ended with Harry upset gave me a lump in my throat too). SP

Love it even though it starts a wee boot extreme. I also love your OCs.

With all these OC's it doesn't read much like fanfiction. So I'm excited to see when we are going to see some familiar faces. One thing to add was that if you exclude the basement, the club is only profiting about $2000 a month. Or $500 a week, that seems pretty low and a like the club is barely scraping by. Is that for a reason? And does Liam not realize this because he is new to it all? Anyway. I'm really intrigued as to what's going to happen next. :)

I do love this story, but (as you did ask for feedback) I could live without the two new characters. They're not bad or anything, but I just don't feel like I want to get to know them a bit more. I do want to see what they know about Harry, but that's the extent of my interest. Of course I could completely change my mind in a few chapters time, as I did with Liam, who I had reservations about, but I really like now. I might just be impatient for the boys to go to Hogwarts, but "good things come to those who wait" and I'm certain it's going to be good!

Love this chapter and the way Draco showed Drey that he wasn't some child. Please tell me he does the same to the other one. Love this fic. Always eager to read more. Keep up amazing work.

I can't tell you how much I want the boys to remain safe and happy with Liam for a while. I do hope you plan to send the boys to Hogwarts. I'm still curious about how Draco wound up in a muggle orphanage in the first place.

Wow for an adult to depend on a child that much is kinda scary. Draco must give some serious alpha vibes for an adult to submit so. Love the story so far. Can't wait to read more.

I really enjoyed the change of POV, it gave an outside adult perspective to Harry and Draco. What they are to each other is totally fucked up, but they didn't start out that way. Very good chapter. :)

Intense chapter. Love the way you are framing this story. Eagerly waiting for next chapter.

I noticed this site doesn't have a date for when the story was last updated. Could you maybe write it in the top of the chapter? Are you going to be continuing this story? I really enjoy it and your an excellent writer.