The story was fantastic! I can't wait to read more
Wow!! You know I have been checking hourly for an update for this story for about two weeks
from sheer excitement and suspense as to what was coming. You didn't disappoint. That mind scene was completely not what I expected but I couldn't imagine it any other way now. I loved how it is Draco and his chains (like a leash and collar maybe ;) ) that are holding back Harry's demons and keeping him sane, happy and healthy. I can't wait to see more and am sorry to hear you've had life kicking your butt recently. I hate when it does that but it seems to like to more often then not.
I love a gun wieldin Liam!! Wow! So touching the 3 of them barging in to save the day!! See they can help keep the boys safe! Stupid American magic community. I had a great thought. Could it be that there little ritual where they all placed their hands on each other bonded them as family or even protected Luam from the obliviate!! Well it's a thought. A girl can hope. I love that man. He's so compassionate and the boys need all they can get. I'd love to see him get with Jess and Drey. They already act like he's theirs.
I love the protection and care and strength of Draco. The abuse was extremely graphic and revolting, but you succeeded in making me feel something. Im only on chapter 7, but so far I find this starkly dark peice emotionally moving. I hope these boys succeed in climbing out of the terrible evil situation they were in and get healthy both physically and mentally.
So, I love these boys. I just want to hug them, tell them everything will be ok and keep them safe. I really hope you have not only Liam but both Jess and Dray meet the boys in England. I think you have it planned or at least I hope) that either Jess or Dray will ask Liam about the boys alone. Then the opposite girl will ask her what she found out (so the spell will not affect her). Then the one who spoke with Liam will be told to talk him into going to England to look for them. I can't wait for more!! And Draco's mindscape!! Wow. I loved it. Like a warrior or a preditor, it's perfect for him! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! I'm curious to see what Harry's mind will be like. Will it be the complete opposite of Draco's? Where his is a peaceful grove but in the middle is a fierce protector?
So, for chapter 17 I love how protective Harry was over Draco when he had his flashback PTSD moment. He was so fierce! I also was so happy that they are getting along like a real family the boys are letting Liam in slowly!! This is another reason I think Liam should meet them in England because no one else really understands what they've been through and he understands the underworld better than most. I really like that they are also getting close to Drey and Jess. It's like a pack, they have to come for the boys, come hell or high water!! Screw the danger! I'm hoping you plan to bring them all to England ( maybe they can start a club there). I think they all understand Draco and his and Harry's relationship the best.
I am excited to see who it was that stole Draco and took him to America. Was it Dumbledore trying to "save" him it is he evil too? Was it Voldemort trying to get Lucius' full focus on his mission? And how will Draco react to his parents? Will he accept them to some extent?
I don't know how they expect them to change Draco that drastically but as long as Harry and Draco are together still and they don't try to separate them then I'm good.
Omg!! So I usually do not read a story prior to it being completed, because I get so anxious for the next chapter. However, sometimes when I see a new story and am browsing through to see if I would like it, I get dragged in. That's what happened here. It is rare. But sometime when the story is so good, even though I try to just skim it sucks me in. You sucked me in. This story is fantastic. I started out skimming. Then found I was reading more than skimming. It is at the point now where I am trying to tell myself to not read anymore til it's done. But I can't help but check everyday for any update. And squeal when it's there! I think I will cave and go back and read it all through then wait for new chapters lol. I just can't wait to see what you do with this. I'm praying you have Liam meet them in England and screw the danger to him. And I wait with bated breath to see how the Malfoys will react to not only knowing there son is alive but what he's like and that he is already bonded to Harry Potter of all people! Will they become another protective force in the boys lives? Will they welcome Harry with open arms? I wait in suspense. Keep up the wonderful work and know I am excited for each and every chapter.
I love that they got a mind healer for Harry. Don't like the reaction they receive to his name from the girl in California. I think Draco did the right thing by taking him out and reassuring their feelings first thing. So glad Remus is going to keep them for a while. They don't need Dumbledore manipulation at all. Wonder when they are going to figure out the latest he is Draco Malloy. Not Black. Can't wait to read more.
Loving this fic and can't wait to read more even thought all the things the boys are going through make me want to cry.