Whooo! Snape's the occlumens!! Yay! A question I have is would Draco have a problem with people hugging Harry? Or is it just Narcissa's perception that makes her think that? Also, isn't the Zabini family neutral as well? Just thought I'd bring it up since I didn't see them in the list and Blaise is in the boys year. And, if Harry being with the Malfoy's opened doors, why would it be seen as rude to invite the light families since Harry's family was light? I was just curious and pondering these questions so thought I'd put them out there. I'm sure they will be answered in future chapters anyways as you are very good with bringing everything together and tying up loose ends. This was a great chapter and set up for wonderful things to come I'm sure of it.
Wow, I love Andie and Tonks and Remus. Why can't they just live with them full time? Loving this can't wait for more.
They finally made it to the Tonk's! And the contrast between them and the Malfoy's is made even more clear with their humble but cozy abode! I loved how Dora worked her way into the boys confidence and trust. I was also glad they were willing to let Remus into their daily lives, although I was shocked they didn't know he was a werewolf. I guess I just assumed everyone knew so this was a new and interesting take on his interactions with others. I find it kind of sad that the Malfoys want to be parents so bad but because of their pure blood pompous nonsense they ruin that. Yet with Andromeda it comes so easy since she is more laid back. Well another wonderful chapter that is helping to progress this story. Can't wait to see hogworts!! Everyone keeps saying Harry will be Hufflepuff and Draco Slytherin, but I can't see it. Yes I understand Harry personality wise may fit there, however as soon as he understands Draco will live in elsewhere from him if they are in different houses I feel he'll tell the sorting hat to put him with Draco. I'll lay in wait to see where you take this piece of artwork.
Great job adding in the new movie term!! I'm so glad Harry's tattoo moves!!! So the secret of Voldemorts connection is revealed. Don't you dare put yourself down! I think your scenes are very descriptive!! I can see the whole scene in my head playing out as I read. I love this story and all you've done so far.
I am an awful reader for not reviewing after every chapter, but I wanted to let you know how powerful your story is. There will always be chapters that are more explain-ie than others. And I think explaining how the link between Harry and Draco came to be was very important. Don't be down on yourself. Depression is a hard thing to overcome, I know I struggle with it as well, and it always seems to return... Know that I and others check your story religiously for your weekly updates. It is one of the highlights of my week.
All the best,
Luna
Hi there,
I'd just like to say how much I am enjoying this story! I'm sorry to hear that you've been depressed, but I assure you that it hasn't affected your writing in the least! Don't worry about pushing yourself too hard though xx
Hugs,
LastSquibStanding
Love it!!
ooooo tattoo!! And a dragon too!! Just perfect. I loved the description of the green river guiding and leading the gold. But I feel like the green is Harry and the gold is Draco. Since the gold is the untamed, destructive force and the green is healing. But then Voldy is attached to the gold which seems to be Harry in that case. A little confusing but wonderfully descriptive and vivid. Now Dobbys in on how their relationship is.
OMG! I absolutely love Pandora lovegood as the core specialist. I feel like she would be perfect for the role and she comes off as very trustworthy. I was slightly shocked that Lucius was so vicious with Narcissa. He came off as so loving and devoted and carino of her before. So it seems like a bit of a Grove reversal. But I could totally see it happening since he is a bit of a loose cannon. I was glad to see you mention Liam, and the girls feels like they're a little bit back in the story. You left this one on a bit of a cliffhanger so I'm even more eager to see what you come up with next.
I love the choice of Pandora Lovegood. She is perfect. It would be great if she could be saved. Luna would be so happy if she did. Personally I think Lucious is a sick. Wait until Draco finds out that he hit Narcissa. Luscious is going to lose them all. Can't wait to find out what Pandora finds.