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for The Secret of the Dragon

by GrangerDanger

schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Why did you leave on a cliff hanger. It was just getting good. Please continue your story it's really good
schedule June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
And now im sad...i have no words. Except curve ball.Good.luck with your challenge !
schedule June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
you can't just leave it there...date-rape? or fantasy? Don't let him rape her, i don't like him, he's a complete creeper. I get the same heebie-jeebies I got from the DADA professor in the first book. I hope Draco's close!
person Koi
schedule June 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is getting pretty interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Cool story can't wait to see where its headed
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is rather interesting and i hope that you update soon as i would like to see what happens next. Is the professor a bad guy? a perv? a stalker type guy that just wants to get in to her pants and lo and behold it'll have to be Malfoy that saves her?! Update soon!!
schedule March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've tried to read this so many times but I just can't. I figured out why! It's not the writing or the story, it's when the characters speak, you don't space out the lines. You write it in the middle of a paragraph, making it a messy read. Can you please please please fix this asap so I can enjoy your story! AKxx