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February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Not too sure what to think of this. I feel like it could be more than just porn without plot. Cause I'm really not seeing a plot. You have great ideas and amazingly descriptive writing.maybe just slow down a bit and add some character development. I mean, the wicked witch was a witch after all. That would be a really cool tie in. Is Dorothy magical in this? I do want to see more because I love your imagination but if she isnt a horny cock slUT like you say, prove it?