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I am so sorry for falling behind in my reviewing. 1-You can never have too much detail. If I have to re-read a chapter, that's just my fate (I'm clearly suffering, you can tell). 2-You were right, I LOVED chapter 5, it was so wrong, but so right. Now, on to chapter 6. "Satisfying shower of velveteen confetti"--screw drawing, THAT is art. And thanks to this chapter I'm now trying to imagine a bedroom wallpapered in dick drawings. Like, I assume they're disembodied? I'm finding this really humorous. These are a couple of delightfully screwed up characters. Hopefully they will be good therapy for each other.

I like that my voice is consistent enough that you can recognize me without a name tag. It feels like when you think someone is really cool but you don't know each other very well, but then they use your name when they say hello. I enjoyed the sex flashbacks in this chapter. I imagine that's how Severus's mind would be working at the time. Time is moving forward as she sketches him but he is also thinking back to earlier in the afternoon. I'm glad Hermione snogged Severus senseless after her reveal and then took him home. I was almost expecting her to just walk away and leave him there gaping like a fish. She's so snarky and in control, I love it. The 'bunnies on the boil' reference to a few chapters ago made me giggle. "You never did check that stove did you?" Lol. "Severus clenched his jaw, only just avoiding a smirk. He found this new Hermione particularly amusing, even if it was at his own expense." -This line got me. I find her particularly amusing too, but I'm not hiding my smirk nor my encouraging cackles. The parallels between their lives are really fun because sometimes they're obvious and other times you have to think a little. Severus seems to be pretty aware of most of the "poignant externalisation[s] of his inner world." He is much sharper with Hermione, rather than alcohol. as his obsession. And of course Hermione rounds out the chapter with a showing of confidence, compassion, and acceptance. The world needs more Hermiones.

I am glad they found each other, because no one else would be okay with half of this. lol His inner thoughts crack me up. I look forward to more, HG4eva

Hey, I'm the anon from a few chapters ago, I guess I wasn't logged in. Whoops. WHHAAAAAA! I can't believe that you wrote that! It was not at all what I was expecting despite my attempt to suss it out before. I love it though. She wasn't just crazy or hella lonely and delusional, she was playing him! YES! And Hermione polyjuicing into Draco of all people is perfect. He has a measure of control over Snape but is still familiar enough that Severus can speak freely with him (or should I say her?). I think the reader who wrote that this is the weirdest smut they've ever read is speaking for all of us haha. It's SO weird, but also easy to read and absolutely hilarious. I find myself laughing out loud at some parts, mostly from your fantastic use of the English language, but also just at the insanity of what is happening. I hope you write a little more because I've been enjoying this, but it was also a pretty good ending.

OMG! What? WHAT!!!! Shut the front door! This was the bestest chapter EVER! 'Smarmy fuck' - bestest word gem. First of all, that fantasy was so HOT. Mmmmm....yummy. Then Draco wanking off in a pub while Snape is telling him of that fantasy even hotter. But seriously, you are a genius. That ending was so epic, I have no words. It was AWESOME! It was her the whole time?! Like I said before you ARE brilliant! These waldos are absolutely bloody fantastic. Until next time....

I'm not sure what it is but Draco is the character I love to hate. This chapter was perfect! Can't wait to read Severus' reaction. The way his rational mind talks back to him is so real. I find my own mind thinks the same and it makes it easier to place facial expressions with the thoughts. For example, when Draco was leaning in and the "headbut" thought zoomed through...there was a sky high eyebrow,a slight grimace, and a slow lean back away from the culprit. Lol. Side note- thank you for the touch back. It means a lot to me that you read my reviews even though they are not always critical or correcting. I just like to let you know what I enjoyed in each story. I've only reviewed a few stories. Two of the three were already completed but I still wanted the author to know I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.

This chapter was fabulously fun. It makes me want to paint and smash food all over my body. You’re a messy influence. The image of Snape skirt shopping is hilarious. “litany of lies” — love this “I wouldn’t want to be in your skirt.”—Hahahaha! “ferrety balls”—Love this. Hot damn! I need to have some ice cream sex. This whole part was excellent. Come to think of it, I’ve got a pint in the freezer right now. And the house is empty. It won’t be as fun alone, but I’m game. head pitched forward—I spy. “Oh Gods! Polyjuice!”—Yeeeees! You sneaky witch. I wondered why Draco was acting so bizarre (but I didn’t want to jump to any conclusions after all the crazy things that have happened in this story). I so love this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

The sarcasm! The puns!!The Snape! I think I love you!!

Wow, that was lovely and cringe-worthy and really, how can one girl be so dense unless...100 bucks says she knew all along. Would totally explain the matching underwear too. Nobody wears matching underwear if they're not out to impress.

HA! I knew it. BTW I will also be writing my masters thesis in a few months. Noooot looking forward to that.Good luck with yours.