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for Balaur

by T-W-O

schedule February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see that you updated this story! I loved that first chapter and it's only getting better. I like the way you wrote Draco. He is my favorite when he's stubbornly trying to hold on to Hermione! Thanks for this story!
person wudelfin
schedule February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next installment...
person eJs
schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but I find it absurd that Lucius and draco were imperioused into becoming death eaters. It absolves them of all their crimes, just like after the previous war
person tsita
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awww Mama Molly is so nice! I hope to read more soon! Good luck on the next chapter!
schedule February 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Intrigued!!
person Dolly
schedule February 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting start. I hope you continue
person Anna
schedule February 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What a great first chapter! I hope to read more!
person meldz
schedule February 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
An exciting start .
person apple
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this!! Please post more soon :)
person lovey_reader
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nice first chapter. I liked how Molly put her and the baby on the clock. I wonder who's under the cloak? I liked the way you wrote it, "the remaining hollow from the Peverell brothers", that was brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter.