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Has anyone ever told you that you are purely evil? A cliffhanger? Thank you for updating so quickly, I think. Just please, please keep it up. :-)

So much emotional upheaval for Balaur and the heavily pregnant Hermione to endure! Ron's emotional immaturity and callousness seem particularly cruel considering he grew up in a loving family where he should have learned kindness and forgiveness. Instead, he's a boorish, self-centered child-man who didn't mature from his war-time experiences. Hermione deserves a better man. I hope Balaur will calm down after Draco arrives. I imagine Draco will need to be near Hermione during her final weeks of pregnancy or Balaur will go berserk again....Great story.

Thank you so much for this update. Somehow Ron’s selfish, immature, cruel behavior seems spot on. Love the protective behavior of Draco. Am also loving the collaboration of the two wildly different "Grandma's". This story is very quickly becoming one of my favorites.

Kudos to Bali because Hermione is really being a bitch right now. Draco is doing his best and she continues to be a dunderhead. I love Hermione but this fic is making me want to slap her silly. If she continues in this path she'll end up being mean to Bali or worse telling Bali his beloved father repeatedly rape her. She mourns for the lost of Ron, a guy who ask to 'flush' down Bali while Draco did what he did to save her humanity, and she's the brightest witch of her age. Hope you'll update again, soon.

Thank you so much for the speedy updates. I find myself anxiously checking several times a day. This almost feels like Christmas. I find myself wondering though, how can Bali be the heir to the Malfoy fortune if he is illegitimate? Just wondering.

I am absolutely love, love, loving this story. Thanks a million for the speedy updates. I find myself checking several times a day for them.

There are so many things wrong with the wizarding world that you could spend life times discussing it and even then not come up with the same conclusion consistently. Life is not strictly black or white. Just because a person is a slytherin, doesn't mean they are pure evil. And just because a person is a Gryffindor, doesn't mean they're strictly absolutely pure good. Look at the Marauders as an example. Look at Ronald. And Malfoy. In many ways,Ron is as much of a bigot as Malfoy and just as prejudiced as the Malfoys. But as well the young git wasn't as blameless as he was thought to be. Everyone has a little dark and light inside of them. Keep up with this story.

I must saybyoubgave such a complex matter dignity that many other authors strive and fail. Superb writing

Great. Love the way the story is going.

Goodness, a very very well written and delivered Dramione. I love the fast pacing and i cant wait for Bali the Beater to emerge.