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March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever read a fanfic that did a thorough job of explaining the post-war magical economy. Well done. I am surprised that Ron wasn't arrested for having sent a Disintegration curse at Hermione. Wouldn't that be attempted magical assault? Did Harry cover for him again? I think he should have had some legal penalty for his malicious attack and not have been allowed to continue any sort of quidditch career.
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March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
A very satisfying ending. Too many Dramione stories end with a wedding; a graduation ceremony was better suited to these circumstances. This chapter did address my concerns about Ron. I was relieved that he did receive some penalty as well as the treatment he needed. Great story. I would love to read a sequel in which we learn more about Balaur's special magical gifts and about the next Malfoy to be born. Thanks for a delightful tale.
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March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just saw on your profile, when I went there to read more of your stories, that you'll be leaving AFF. I hope you'll consider posting on "Archive Of Our Own" (aka AO3) for your next works. I am just a reader, not a writer, of fanfics but writers' comments suggest it's a good format to use. Please let us know, somehow, where you land and whether your author name will be the same. Best wishes from a fan of yours.
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March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on another captivating story! I am glad "all's well that ends well." :-) I am not happy she got pregnant again. I would have ripped out my own organs before I let all that crap happen again. lol I look forward to your next story. Thanks again, HG4eva
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the labor and delivery? What impact did it have on Hermione and Draco? How long between the birth and going back to Hogwarts? Did a chapter get lost?
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping there is more to this. I didn't see it labeled WIP and I usually hesitate to read unfinished works. It's very good. It's unusual to see certain characters unglued. I like it.
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the negative comment. The story is fine. An interesting take on the duo.
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the timely updates! I think my favorite part was how Draco and Hermione had to actually deal with the trauma. Thanks for not just glossing over it, but also not making it too dark. Great writing!
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Also- wanted to say a quick "sorry" for asking the Ron questions here. Didn't/Still don't know how to private message? But thanks for answering. I look forward to reading your work on other sites. (I saw that in your profile. Thanks again!
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You certainly didn't go fluffy on this. Realism and reality, huh? I didn't know where you were going with this story when it started, but I would never have seen all of this coming. I am glad to know people are healing from their horrors, but saddened to think everyone is so burdened and sad. I guess you're not a Ron fan, huh? lol I hope Bali is happy at least. Thank you again, HG4eva