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for The yellow Brickroad

by Lalani

person Kvarta
schedule January 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm so glad to see that this story is not abandoned. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

schedule October 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Are Russell and Severus the same person? I was quite confused reading this chapter since the names seemed to be used interchangebly.

 

person Anonymous
schedule October 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am absolutely loving this story.  This version if snape is so great.  It makes me happy.  I can't wait until school starts. Are we going to have any of the twins povs? Again  I love it!  Keep writing 😀

person moodysavage
schedule October 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm still not sure about this story. I can see Severus maturing and getting a family so that doesn't bother me. But so much is focused on the girls that it feels more like a next gen fic instead of a Severus fic.

And I was so disappointed that they sold their house!!! The yellow brick road house!!! I don't  see Severus letting his home be sold like that. Coming back to help with the Voldemort problem... yes. But not totally leaving his home. It would have made more sense to close it up until their return. But I am enjoying your story so far.

And will there be any Harry friendship? It seemed to be hinted at and that would be really great.

oh my freakin' gosh... your code to leave this review is 'robledo garcia mussidan'!

 

person lusting_for_snape
schedule February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Finally a story that paints Lily in her proper light. She is so self-centered, selfish, condescending and arrogant. I've never liked her. LOL, major kudos for the snark of the daughters towards the Potters.
person DinaTheCat
schedule February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
*Tut* Of course Lily thinks Snape has been single and pining for her all these years. I really wanted to see her face when she met his wife and children. I hope she'll go back to the house :-)
person louane
schedule February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Tssss Lily is so full of herself ! I can't wait to see her reaction when she 'll see Severus wife !
person DinaTheCat
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised that Snape would go for facial piercings... But I suppose he isn't Severus Snape any more, is he?
person lusting_for_snape
schedule February 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love the yellow path with footprints to the front door. What a delightfully creative detail :-)