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for Self-fulfilling Prophecy

by Sasunarufan13

person Anon
schedule June 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update. It's been soooooo long, all I do all day long is wait for an update. Ha, anyways your story development is great. I wonder what is going on with Harry and Draco, I really would love another fic written from their pov. Hope you aced your exams.
person moodysavage
schedule May 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter. When you said slight cliffhanger I was expecting the boys to try out the dragons and get kidnapped by it being a port key or something lol. Anyway I liked this chapter. Didn't notice anything wrong in the chapter... but in the post script it's 'tide' you over not 'tie' :)
person AnonymousTigress
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
More like oh shit or oh damn. Oh, Hermione, why? You have such a big mouth. I hope James straightens up that spine and tells his mom off. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just because you asked... chapter one towards the end after Draco learns Harry used Severus' name for Albus... 'infliction' should be 'inflection' I like how this is starting :) I can't remember if I started this story before or not but if so I lost track of it. Haven't been reading as much on AFF. But I like this.
person moodysavage
schedule May 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good grief... that last review was me. I forgot to put in my name.
person moodysavage
schedule May 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
lol yes Harry, what does that boy mean about Malfoy liking men more than women. That was perfect timing. I love the flow of this story.The whole thing from Albus' point of view is really well done. Now back to more reading!
person moodysavage
schedule May 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so good. I'm at chapter 7 now and it wasn't until this chapter that I started to wonder if Harry and Draco aren't in some kind of relationship already. Before this it seemed that Draco had feelings for Harry but Harry was rather oblivious and Ginny saw Draco's interest before Harry. But this chapter seems to feel like they could already be in a relationship though I hadn't thought Harry would do that while married to Ginny especially since they had times where things seemed normal between them. 'Albus nodded silently; his body still wrecked with tremors as he tried to calm himself down.' right before they floo to Draco's to fix the dragon... wracked with tremors is the word you were looking for though racked is what the dictionary would say to use... I personally prefer wracked though myself lol. Def. not wrecked though.
person moodysavage
schedule May 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! But now I have to wait. And wait. And wait. *sigh* Anyway, hope your exams are going/went well. Happy writing!Oh, and I love how James knew exactly how to play his mom to get her permission without telling her it would be Draco that takes them to the festival. But why is Harry working and not Draco?
person AnonymousTigress
schedule May 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Who shall they be running into at the fair? I wonder, I wonder. I know the feeling about exams. Been there, done that. Good luck on them!
schedule April 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
UGH! That was nasty. i get the impression it wasn't much of an accident, though. Thank Goodness Draco could fix it. A great chapter for a great story!