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person Anon
schedule April 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't take offense to whiney review. I do want more so I thought why not beg in a whiney way. I just wanted you to know we are still here and very interested.
person effie88
schedule March 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Reread this multiple times haha I love it! Cant wait for for an update!!
person Keladry
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good lord this story is absolutely brilliant! I really hope you continue with this one to the end! I LOVE it! I love the pace of the story and the dialogue and the fluff but I love how it's not all fluff and surface problems. Seriously in love with this story!
person HP1990
schedule March 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
By god I love this story. It's so over the top and unrealistic, but at the same time, it somehow has me feeling like "sure, this could totally happen if they were both gay and Malfoy showed up at Harry's doorstep". Hope this wasn't the last ever chapter, because you are really teasing me with that chapter ending here!
schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. You have a great pace and build. I think the characters are very realistic. I adore the way you have the match up. The right kind of crazy for each other. I love that Draco is the more dom, but that Harry isn't weak for him to be so. Honestly I don't have one complaint only that I want more!!!
person Harley
schedule February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely amazing. I loved how I could actually feel how Hardy feels about Malfoy. And the way you describe Malfoy, just brings an image into my head. I also love how immediately it didn't go straight to the sexy parts, but it actually felt like a story and not just a one page porn story. I feel like it's more of an adult book/fan fiction not porn. Because, it may have sex scenes in it, it has other things in it, besides the sex, like some adult books would be. I enjoyed reading this and I hope there will be more.
person Anon23
schedule February 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Was so happy to see an update today! Really enjoying this story! And your responses to some of those reviews, wow hahaha
person Jess
schedule February 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but my first impression of this chapter was of vapid and shallowness. Half of the chapter was spent describing clothing or character 'looks' rather than setting up a back story or a proper scene. The overuse of the word 'fu@k' lent an air of immaturity. The only thing missing was a trip to the mall for makeovers and a teenybopper boy band.
person Victoria
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly good story. All the hotness in this chapter left me unprepared for it to flip into suspicion and worry for Harry. I believed Draco was telling the truth until this all happened. Great dialogue that gets teen guy snark and angst just right. I'm eager for more.
person staar
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
reading the first chapter I almost fell off my chair with Harry's I wonder if I can see his ass, man that was so funny !!!!! good story update soon 1!!!!:):):)