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You are welcome. Another great chapter and no indication of medicated Hugh in it as well....feel better and thank you for the chapter.

Please update chapter 11 soon.

You might not know it yet, but on my end, chapters 10 and 11 are the same. Otherwise, this is great so far.

He's alive!

Chapter 10: The twins are awesome! Harry's sudden mood change makes me think that the pregnancy hormones are still working. I like that you made his reactions realistic. Plus, he got warm and fuzzy, but not sickeningly sweet. A bit early for the Ministry attack on Mr. Weasley. Didn't it happen right before winter break in canon? I suppose you must have your reasons plot-wise.

I wish I'd had the twins on hand after I gave birth!

Poor Harry, I know the pain of trying to go back to sleep (or just going to sleep) when in the same room as someone who snores like a pig..! (and again with the food :D) I wonder how long his gestation will be? I made some research and it differs from one serpent to the other... I think between 6-7 months was the most common period. However, if we take into consideration that Harry is half Basilisk, the gestation period could be up to one year, maybe more (as with elephants)! It also depends if the Basilisk is oviparous (lays eggs then sit on them), but I am pretty sure it is the case. So from 5 to 8 months inside the body, then up to 3 months in a nice little nest. I hope Harry will be kidnapped by this time otherwise it is not going to be pretty. He is already showing signs of being in the protective/killing mother setting, I don't want to imagine what it will be if he cannot have unlimited access to his egg because of classes >:)

Wow...! What a chapter! :D I liked that everything wasn't dragged eternally, yet so many things happened in just one chapter to poor Harry. This year would have been hard enough without paranoia and the constant hunger. I dearly hope the strain he puts on his body plus the blood quill (I don't know if Umbrage started using it yet) won't be detrimental to the hatchling's health... Initially I thought Harry woke up in Snape's quarters and I was really happy, firstly because Snape is one of my favourite character, and secondly because it meant Harry wouldn't be alone when in labour (even if his instincts insist on it). But it seems more like he unconsciously found abandoned rooms? I can't see if what he finds every time he goes there are exclusively items he gathered, or if some of them are brought by Snape? In short, is Snape aware of Harry's change and pregnancy? Maybe you already have answered this in the next chapters, I'll have to see :D And of course: the Twins! It is a bit easy to make them Harry's allies, and they often are in Dark!Harry or manipulative!Dumbledore fics, but they are just too lovable :d They also have this mischievous streak which can be turned into a darker, creepier or more sadistic trait. On top of that, they definitely are resourceful and geniuses in their own way. There are so many things one can do with characters like this, I am impatient to see what kind of role they will play in the future ;)

Olala, this was so enjoyable :D I fell a bit guilty because I usually like Draco in fics, but I can't deny he deserved being brought down one step or two. And what a way to go! Harry could give Snape some competition in the cold, condescending threatening department. Now I am wondering whether it will change their relationship or just Draco's perception of Harry, while still keeping to the edge of the story. I forgot to comment about the scents of the different characters in my last review, but it was a good idea. I guess Harry is still evolving, the venom not changing him in one go. I can only imagine what kind of torture it must be to be in the presence of Umbrage with her suggary nauseating scent on top of all her other mannerisms. I myself have always thought of Snape's scent as smoky: warm as a fire, a bit heady (as with woods with strong essences like pine), overpowering and it can really bother people who don't like it :d However, cinnamon is such a nice fragrance, I like it too :) I read your answer to another who is impatient for Voldemort to get there, so I will try to be patient too :p I know I will regret it if you feel pressured to write something rushed, I much more prefer when you can develop your story at your own pace.

NOOOOOOOOO!!! Why? I was expecting the egg, yes. But... how can you kill Harry? Its worst than killing Snape. Bring him back!