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Loving this so far, your take on harry and him not being blind to the manipulations around him is great! Cant wait to read more. Oh and more about the Egg.

Incredible story! I'm falling for her Harry. How can I be alerted when you upgrade?

P.S: Thanks for writing!

Aww, sweet torture, I'm so happy Dolores is getting her just, it's about time I would say 😄 please update chapter 25 soon.

is SS his true mate? Looking forward to what happens next. Will he keep baby in the Chamber with the elf looking after it?

i actually was looking forward to a possessive, caring father Voldy!

Where can I read this story as it has been blocked?

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CL.Mustafic,
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I've been reading this story and recently saw that it is hidden (for some reason) and am wondering if you know why it has been hidden and if you plan to post the rest of it either here (by somehow getting the site to unhide it) or post it elsewhere as I was enjoying this story quite a bit and like the unique idea of having Harry and Voldy's kid be a snake like egg at birth and just in general enjoying your version of Harry and seeing what revenge he cooks up for Umbridge. If you do post it elsewhere though I would love it if you could somehow reply or post a link on your profile so that readers like me who want to find out what happens next can read the rest of this delightful and interesting story.

Ch. 24 // . . . it was no wonder the man was so bitter with life… having your talents waste away teaching ungrateful children must be torture. . . .// Of course, the children might not be quite so ungrateful if he weren't so hateful towards them. Good chapter, though I never like reading about torture even for someone as horrible as Umbridge. Thank you for giving us fair warning so I was able to just skim that part, just enough to get the gist of it.

I loving the thought process you use for Harry. How it is clear what he wants, and the emotions used FAN!~

Ch 24: A nice chapter. Mostly in-between things. I liked the update on Harry's dreams.