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for To Be Himself

by RavieSnake

person Anonymous
schedule July 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was sweet and fun! Luv the twist thing about "be himself"

Thank you for share your story!

french reader

xxx

person T-W-O
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Not sure how I missed this - he mind goes second. Laughed like a hyena at Draco oozing that Malfoy manipulative charm. I wanted to hex Hermione's only living relatives myself. Jett reminds me of Dudley. Well played!
person Allison
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Loved it! However, I had only one issue, which is the use of the word "snogging." It's like saying "moist" to some people. Anyway, that's just personal preference. I do like how you develop these characters into people we can love easily. Hope to see more works from you (including more Songs of Regret)!
schedule March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was such a cute story. Funny too! I love your writing. I hope you have time to work on some of your other stories soon.
person Skybee
schedule March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
IT'S SO FLUFFY I'M GONNA DIE!!!
person Tahn
schedule February 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet.
person meldz
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think Imogen is just the tough love kind of woman, still she's a bitch. I'm not sure if my observation was correct on the very last part. I believed that Imogen just want what was best for Hermione and that's why she was really nasty with the blokes she was with. Now that hermione is married and happy, Imogen is finally happy-ish.
I love the whole confession part between Dramione.
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What's not to love about Draco? Loved this!
person MzPearlz
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I've never been so happy with a short story before. I mean, it wasnt super short but.. anyway... This was awesome and I needed some fluff in my life. Good job! :D
person cpetnm
schedule January 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet and fun! Thank you for the story!