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for The Book that Binds *COMPLETE*

by Desert_Sea

schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I am aching with laughter and unresolved sexual tension. I don
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I just read 2 - 4 and I haven't laughed out loud like that in a long while. Her teasing is going to kill him, or get her killed, in the best way possible. lol The AKA...AKA line almost had me doubled over at the end. This is so much fun and I look forward to more soon. Thank you again! HG4eva
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was absolutely hilarious AND touching. My stomach hurts from laughing so hard. Once again, the writing has me in orgasmic ecstasy. I'm floating on a stream of salacious, sarcastic, stunning sentences. (Then I jumped overboard and went skinny dipping in them.)

"Hermione was woken by an acute case of missing limb." This was such an excellent first sentence.

"What if he was thinking,
person lovey_reader
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well that was awkward at first. But I loved the whole walking with a picnic basket...priceless. he must have felt so emasculated when he had to ask fer to encouraging him. :( My heart went out to him. To have such a man have to ask for such a basic little thing was heartbreaking. I loved how instead she used all those other spells to clean him gently and then shaved him. That was brilliant. Although I really would have loved a great sex shower scene, but oh well maybe next time.
person LeWyKi
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so now Hermione would make a great barber, as well...Is there anything, that woman cannot do? Aside from that, great scene, wonderful writing and especially in this chapter I certainly recognised their general character traits. Admit it, these are the same people from the Quickening thrown in slightly different (and yet increasingly familiar) situations. Actually, that is probably, why I like both of your stories so much - I appreciate the way you portray the main characters. Anyway, I distinctly recall reading, that this story would be updated slower than the last - if this is what you call slow then I stand by my earlier statements and say, Impressive! Thank you for this new chapter and any that may follow :)
person Robin
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome start.
I wonder how much the book's effect will grow over time.
And I am really looking forward to more bantering - hardly ever laughed so much in a HG/SS story and of course "action".
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Keep writing and update soon!
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm thoroughly enjoying story. Can't wait to see where it's going
person LeWyKi
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, just wanted to say, I like your new story, so far :) I only just caught on, that there is, in fact, a new one. It's a bit lighter than the last, but that is a welcome change, I think, and also a good idea for the two bibliophiles. Literally "Forming a connection through literature". Lighter for now, at least - no idea, what may develop except for the obvious, of course, considering the category. Nothing witty from my side this time, sorry. But as always I'm eagerly awaiting any updates and still like your writing style a lot.
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet Merlin! (wiping my mouth) That was so tasty. Now I want to go work on my story. (Dammit, I need to exercise first!) I