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for The Optimal Balance

by TheMightyFlynn

person Hestia
schedule March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you continued writing Harry and Draco's "19 Years and 5 Minutes Later" story. You have not disappointed. I hope it's a long one because I'm really enjoying it. I love how Lily affects Draco. I like the intensity of Harry and Draco's relationship and how they defend one another. I wonder how the boys are going act with them getting married. I can't wait to read more about the Weasleys' reactions. I don't know when you update, but it seemed like I checked and there was never an update (I could be wrong) and then there were 3 new chapters. Woo-hoo! Keep up the awesome work.
person Jan
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Even though so many years have pass, I feel like no matter what, Ron is still no real friend to Harry, he's more then eager to swing a punch, or turn his back on Harry then stop and think for 2sec about Harry. Please update chapter 8 soon.
person Jan
schedule February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
A protective Harry is always a adorable and hot sight 😉 can't wait for chapter 7.
person Jan
schedule February 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update chapter 5 soon 😁
person Jan
schedule February 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I found the sequel! 😍 absolutely love this story😁 please update chapter 4 soon.
person Talliane
schedule February 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yay a sequal! Happy I found this! Draco seems like he's going to have more to adjust to then he seemed to have thought though. And I don't blame Harry for his reaction. I know how he feels about having the other half involved in his children's lives, thankfully she's not a true option right now.
person reader
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i'm interested in reading more glad it wasn't a one shot...loved to see lucius interact with the potter children.
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, birthday sex! I've missed this story/sequel.
person BriBunny
schedule January 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I love your stories the optimal balance and the nineteen years and five mins later. That one by far is my favorite. You really have stayed true to the original characters. Just wanted to say thank you and to see if you were going to continue with this story of if this was just a one time deal to wrap up the other one. Just wondering thanks for writing such and awesome story.