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for The Optimal Balance

by TheMightyFlynn

schedule October 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love!

person MelodyPond
schedule November 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I adore this series. So sweet. The beginning is intense but the way you bring them together is so wonderful. Love love LOVE it. 

person Anonymous
schedule October 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I think you ended at a good spot even though I want more. I do hope you continue past the one shot you have planned, but I realize inspiration has to strike. Anways, thanks for writing this one and hope to see some of your writing soon. 

Hestia 

person Jan
schedule October 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely loved it, it was sweet, funny, caring, and not to mention exciting at the end! Love how Harry and Draco are so lovey dovey and kinky😉

I can't wait for the next one shot 😻

person Anonymous
schedule October 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Aww, I love that they don't want to let go of each other. I wish I had what they have. I think that's what is so appealing is that it a wonderful relationship with problems and issues to overcome. I truly love how you write. I like when Draco opens up a bit so Harry can see what he is feeling. So now I will ask again for more, keep thke going, don't just stop. I trust that you have more to write about this version of Harry and Draco. I really want a story line with a pregnant Harry. It has to be Harry, not Draco. 

Thanks for writing.

Hestia 

person Jan
schedule October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Lol, poor Tori, she didn't get her dance, please update chapter 40 soon.

person Gervas
schedule October 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just want you to know that I think this is a fantastic story. I think you're a very good and consistent writer. New to the site and this is the first story I've really gotten in to. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next update.

person Jan
schedule October 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Trust is very important, it's nice that Draco opened up to Harry, especially before the wedding, I feel like somehow that made it even more special. Please update chapter 39 soon.

person Jan
schedule October 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

See, the kids had good intentions and a brilliant idea for a wedding gift😆 pleas update chapter 38 soon.

person Anonymous
schedule September 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I didn't think it was korny. I actually liked it, I mean I read these things for the happily ever after so I want them to fix it. I also can imagine if this happened and I loved someone the way they love each other I'd go through with the wedding. It may be the stupid thing to do, but sometimes you just follow your heart. 

Also,  please continue the series! I'm thinking a Harry pregnancy would be a great read from your pov. 

Hestia