I have to say, I didn't think I could dislike Harry any more than I already did. Honestly, he reminds me more and more of Tom Riddle. Of course, I always wondered how he was never affected by the Horcrux that was part of him for so long. I mean, he had it's powers, why not it's hate? My only problem with the scene between Harry and Kingsley, is that I don't believe that Kingsley would let his guard down at all, and aren't Aurors trained to counter attacks like that? Interesting.
I am looking forward to the moment Harry Potter is beaten. And I hope Draco is the one to smack him down. I am definitely Team Snape - always have been. Another good chapter, and more 'yep, this is why I have always disliked Harry'! Well done.
I don't review on here very often, but I have to tell you that your story has compelled me to. I have always disliked Harry as a character from the beginning. And this story has just reenforced every reason I dislike him! You have engendered a truly visceral reaction to your characters, and that makes me happy. I don't how you will do it, but I hope, really hope that they finally figure out the key, and Harry is exposed for the corrupt, down right evil person he is. Severus may have been under-handed in things he did, but he was forced into the position he endured, and endure it he did. It is so easy for those who sit in the comfort of their bubbles, because of the things people like he did to keep everyone safe. It is time for him to enjoy a freedom he had never known before!
Eh honestly, neither of these guys deserve Hermione or her efforts to save them. Snape did what he did to save her,Harry and everyone from the curse but its the methods he used and how he controlled every facet of her life for almost 10 years and wore her down until she could only think of and rely on him and how he would hurt her unnecessarily and pretty much screwed her head up that rile me up. Harry who, while he has indeed suffered greatly mentailly, it still doesnt excuse what he is now putting her through or his abuse of power ansd threatening his own friends and psuedo- family. At this point it feels like only a time turner will be able to fix the mess they are all in. No matter what happens Hermione is going to lose someone who means something to her, but who doesnt deserve her.
Quite a bit of pain could also have been avoided had Snape at least tried to leave clues and info to the Order that couldnt be traced back to his location that Hermione was alive but not safe to approach. He also could have tried a different approach on to how he treated Hermione when not purging the curse, although he could have been much more gentle in that as well, instead of acting like the suffering victim and routinely guilt tripping her.
Their friends also have a bit of blame in all this since they seem to have a bad case of bystander syndrome and seemingly refuse to take any real action to either stop Harry and his obvious madness or help Hermione by getting her the hell away from him. Draco is at least trying to be there for her while still doing his job, even if that job entails that Severus rightfully got to prison. He is the one person in this story with his head on straight and not letting his emotions and personal feelings trip him up.
Hyped to see what happens next
Nooooo shes going to be forced to marry that douche!!! Noooooooooo make it not sooo. Still her enjoying your work.
Still here for you!!!, loving the wind down hope all is revealed soon amd harry goes and sucks a big one!!
I have enjoyed your story, thus far. I find your notes to be most entertaining; i can relate to college life.
I saw you were asking on song suggestions for this story. Im not sure your preferences but i was listening to a song called 'Sunday' by Lo Pro. I found it fitting.
Looking forward to the follow up.
-BlackMaiden
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A wedding really a wedding hahahhaha
I wasn't expecting that let me guess this is when the Aurors came or the is the reason why the Aurors knew where they were hahahhahaha
I like how you turn events in a second hahaha
Nice job
Oh and by the way congratulations on you graduation
Master has given Dolby a diploma Dolby is a free elf hahahhahaha
So what's the next step a Phd in music ??? Or you want to be a celebrity ? ?
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Yes good chapter!!!!!, loving the back story fill in even had a little dry cry near the end there. Draco best tighten up not long left best be finding where the key goes. Maybe the vault at the cottage???