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by Marionne25

person Mol-dune
schedule August 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

If “Snape” gets off because Harry makes it so, Hermione and “Draco” could get married and live happily ever after. Then, Snape could be considered their children’s grandpa- in a way. Then Draco actually gets to see what life with Hermione would have been like— by playing the grandpa... I know, you have the ending decided. I just thought Inwouod throw that out there. 

person Mol-dune
schedule August 25, 2019 at 12:00 AM

If “Snape” gets off because Harry makes it so, Hermione and “Draco” could get married and live happily ever after. Then, Snape could be considered their children’s grandpa- in a way. Then Draco actually gets to see what life with Hermione would have been like— by playing the grandpa... I know, you have the ending decided. I just thought Inwouod throw that out there. 

person Mol-dune
schedule August 24, 2019 at 12:00 AM

You have literally consumed my life for the last week. I couldn’t stop reading. I can’t wait to read the ending!!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much👍

person Mol-dune
schedule August 24, 2019 at 12:00 AM

How do I know when you update this story? I need to know!!!!!!

schedule December 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I read this story. I did find it confusing at some points. Nice story but it looked like a Draco story to my. He is so much the knight in shiny armour that I was expecting  him to save spineless Hermione  from marrying Potter. It was difficult to determine who she loved. If she loved Potter, Severus or Draco.

ho Draco has take Severus identity to face death. I would have loved that you explained how he did such a brigh thing. He is a great wizard with extra skills or did he use polyjuice. How did he do it?   If it isn't polyjuice them Severus is not off the hock so to speak since he will have to take over Draco life and the juice for all his life.  Why would Severus want to be Draco?   I tried de to see where the story is going since whe are near the end but I just cannot. 

 

Hermione  is really getting on my nerve. If she does not want to be with Potter why not say so? Is he going to kill her? What ever decision she makes, Severus is to be executed, so what has she got to lose? She will still be happy that he is dead. Why is she acting like a mat and is waiting for Draco to come and save her? This is so annoying. 

 

Harry Potter is controlling the justice system? This is something that was too hard to accept regardless of who he is and how much money he has. Harry decides who and when the person dies. Really? 

 

All my hopes of Draco Taking him down is been destroyed by him taking Severus place. 

I really think it would have been better if this was a Draco Hermione because if Severus end up staying in Draco body , this will just be that.  Any way I look forwards to see how it will end. For Severus and Draco. Take Care

schedule July 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

You changed the story of how Hermione got hit with the spell, originally, it was a spell reflected back at her  and the chapter 11 it became belatrix chasing harry and Hermione and hittin Hermione with the spell???!!!😐😐😐😕😕😕

schedule April 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I am so confused. I get Hernione has stockholm syndrome but did it also turn her into an idiot? First when escaping Harry she was confused how to get around him...uh...ur a witch with his wand and she suddenly forgot petrificus totalis she used on Neville and bombardo to get out the windows. She forgot she has a patronus, she can't get draco to get her a new wand? I know it's not ideal but throughout Harry Potter they pick up and make use of various other wands. Also, Wth if draco is so rich. Get a frigging minister in to marry Hermione and snape, stat. Sh*t draco could disapparate with her to Germany and marry her himself even, I mean are these ppl wizards or not. Harry is not that fricking bright in the books so I highly doubt he suddenly shot up 50 IQ points. 

schedule April 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Anyone reading this who thinks Snape deserves Azkaban while Harry doesn't is nuts in the head. Harry is absolutely repulsive and so are the rest of the Weasels. No wonder they are poor, as they are so stupid.  Hermione isn't married to Harry, he has absolutely NO SAY in what she has to do. She needs to take her d*mn things and go to Draco and ditch literally everyone she used to know.

BTW..... what the heck happened to Lupin. He was supposed to meet her and we don't know what happened. This happens a lot at the end of your chapter... it's like cliffhanger and next chaptet completly something else. It's really jarring. Also, what about Luna? I feel like Lupin and Luna would be able to see Harry for the scum he is and help Hermione

schedule January 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is my first review on this site. I hope all is well. This is one of my favorite stories. I hope you update soon so we can find out what Harry is going to do. 

schedule August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good morning. Firstly, please accept my sincere apologies for not reviewing your story sooner. I've been following with bated breath since the start and I adore it. What a complex and tangled web you have woven! Your Narcissa was glorious, your Hermione is believable (poor girl!) And your Snape... My heart breaks for him. I'm Loving your demented tormented Harry. I hope things have improved for you in real life, sending good vibes and happy thoughts your way.... I've been missing your story and have been checking every day for an update (eagerly, not impatiently!) I just wanted you to know that you still have readers and we wish you all the best XX