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by goldensnitch18

schedule November 22, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Hi,

love this story so far. Just wondering if and there will be any updates?

 

thank you

schedule March 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Shame really that they feel that they have to live their lifes to please others, sad...
person KK
schedule March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG pls update!
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
James is a dick. Albus+Alice FTW. And I get what your note said about Alice, but it's not quite the same. James was obviously not really in love with her(or he wouldn't have cheated) where Al is; Scorpius IS in love with Rose and wouldn't hurt her like that. Anyway, just my $0.02
schedule February 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Last two chapters: I wouldn't gave guessed Astoria would be so snobby about Rose and James is a prick!! Go for it Rose!
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well, I said it in my prior review, and I was right. VERY well done first time scene, I salute you. *salutes*
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Still love the story line, smut may be explored a bit more in depth but that's just me. They are so not dating. Hope Rose heals.
person azalea33
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a great job with this story! I am always excited when I see an update!
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The bet was good and better, more smut would be nice, but the content makes up for it, maybe the could have a squabble about something put some strain on things? I love how you keep them apart as they agreed.
Very lovely story!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far! I'm thinking that eventually, Scorpius & Rose are going to find out the truth of the old Lee Greenwood song: "And when we touch, baby, don't you know; it won't be touch and go, it's gonna be touch and go crazy."