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I'm so surprised you haven't read Hate and Love, there are so many similarities between our stories. Just throwaway sentences here and there, but all the same. I'm enjoying your story, and it's particularly angsty - fab! Look forward to more AKxo

I agree with you. Theo and Luna are really a good match in this story. I'm glad you included them. Draco could learn a thing or two from Theo couldn't he?

I hope Hermione finds out what happened and helps all the girls in Slytherin. And I like how Theo is treating Luna, being so sweet. Hope he teaches the other animals in that zoo how to behave.

Aw that Dirty Dog Lucius inviting Draco's woman to his playpen. Wondering who are attending though.

Is it wrong that I don't think Draco is a complete dick? I think he's cocking up a fair bit, too possessive and somewhat inconsiderate but not an outright dick. I'm hoping that it is, at least in part, due to the fact that he's 16 and has been put under considerable pressure becoming the head of the family (in legal terms) and feeling that he has to defend his choice of partner to any (and most) pure bloods that he and Hermione encounter. I don't doubt that there are some ulterior motives involved and I look forward to finding out exactly what they are but I do hope/feel that there is a genuine affection there too, especially with how passionately he protects Hermione. Maybe I'm just being a hopeless romantic but I do think that he has been making be moves because he maybe doesn't know how to achieve his goals in any other way but hopefully the intention are good......just poorly executed.

Ok, so! I was scanning through my own reviews on Malevolence and came across your page from that. I freaked out when I saw that you wrote the Wicked stories - I read them before I began writing ff and loved them! I started reading The Dare last night and am up to chapter 7. In a review response to lexiatel you mentioned me and my Draco (: Absolutely loved that! So thank you for letting me get in your head haha. As I said, I just finished Chapter 7 and still have a bit to go. I'm very intruiged by your Draco, finding him dark and very mysterious. Normally I need to be in Draco's head to appreciate his darkness, but you have managed to construct Draco in a way where that is not needed. It only adds to the mystery that you reveal piece by piece of him and his intentions with each chapter. But with every answer you give us, five more questions follow. It's brilliant and I love it. I will review more as I plough my way through the remaining chapters, but just had to thank you for reviewing my story and writing such a fantastic ff and Dark Draco. AKxx

enjoying the story, but if Hermione is such a smart girl then why hasn't she figured out his angle? its just a bit odd. and not to be rude, but a response more in-depth than a "she's in love" explanation would be grand. thanks

The BDSM scene was good, having het blindfolded and choosing a safe word. I agree Hermione puts up a fight trying not acknowledge this side. But Draco is young how much can he know about the lifestyle? Would live to read how he manages. Would like his pov,how does he see her and feel about her? Hopefully it's dark!

Very nice and light. Perfect for Hermione ' first foray. Love the safe word! XD

I don´t normally like/enjoy darker fics, but this is stuck with me!