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for The Dare

by Tassanaburrfoot

person raevynstarr
schedule April 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Arrrgh! I need to know what Draco is gonna do next. Damn cliffies haha anyways, I'm thinking it wasn't Blaise who killed Daphne because wouldn't that be too obvious? No idea who it would be though. Nice chapter! :)
person Jo
schedule April 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please please keep going with this fic!
person raevynstarr
schedule April 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Why the fuck aren't there more chapters? *cry* haha. Oh man, I'm glad I read this story. I was gonna skip over it because I don't normally read stuff like "it all began with truth or dare" BUT damn I'm glad I took a chance. This story had be rolling! Everything before it got hella serious was so over the top, ridiculous, far-fetched and awkward and ....it was awesome as fuck. XD I love it!
schedule April 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
schedule April 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I hope to see you continuing to write. I feel that your story is full of complex feeling and motives!
person HP1990
schedule March 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so now I've read the whole thing and I have also read some of the authornotes, enough to know you are not of the same conviction as Hermione when it comes to abortions. I still have a problem with that chapter though... Visiting an abortion clinic should have put her at ease with abortions and should have given her the knowledge that it's not potentially fatal. No nurse working at an actual clinic would tell a child something so brain dead... That said though, you have me on the edge of my seat here? Draco is such n ass, and he is showing classical signs of someone who will later end up abusing his spouse severely. No matter how much he improves and ends up regretting his actions against the Greengrasses, I hope he pays for what he did. Looking forward to seeing where Daphne got to and how long it'll take Hermione to figure everything out!
person HP1990
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and still loving this, but I just have to take a break here to state the obvious.. I'm going to go out on a limb here, and assume you are American? Why do I think this? Because of your view on abortion. There is NO record of any woman dying of having an abortion. If you do it early, you just take a pill, have heavy cramps and menstruation like bleeding (though it is a heavy bleed, similar to after an actual birth) and you will likely feel nauseous. That's it. Giving birth is far more dangerous with more chances of something going wrong. I have never had an abortion myself, but I have given birth twice. The first birth both me and the baby could have died, simply because the baby was in a slightly different position (still head first, but face up). They had to attach a suction cup to baby's head and two grown men had to pull while I pushed. How is that less dangerous than taking a pill and suffering just the cramps of birth? Sorry about the rant.. I'll go back to reading now...
person Jo
schedule March 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update! I love this fic!
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Soooo...Is it just me or is Lucius really sexy? (Creepy- but kinda yummy!) No- just me? Good to know! :) Clearly I liked this chapter! Love when I see an update- makes my day!
person Coranassa
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love your version of Lucius in this story. Too many fics paint him in the most evil light. I do hope Draco stops with the smoking... ew. It makes him less attractive in my opinion. Love the story so far!