Really enjoying the story. Can't wait to read more.
I know you said some are saying too much is going on here, but I am personally really enjoying all the twists and new information. This is one story I check for updates constantly as it is keeping my attention and interest so well. And I loved the scene here at the end between Draco and Hermione. That's so much like how I see their interactions in my mind. I can't wait to see what's next! :)
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, although the sex scenes are great in the preceding chapters, they aren't necessary in all......especially when you're trying to create a compelling story. I really liked how Hermione seems to have found her voice and backbone but I also get the feeling that Draco is trying to prove himself more trustworthy, although I don't doubt that he still has some underhanded tricks up his sleeve.
Hope you get your technical issues sorted out soon, as I do always look forward to your updates.
unfortunately i'm so bored with this story.... i keep reading hoping for something to happen. its starting to really drag. too many plots, too little character development. I didnt even care about the rape-y/ abusive relationship between H/D. I just think you took on too much and just get bogged down... I dont know if i'll continue, i just hope you have some sort of outline or story line that youre following because it doesnt feel like it.
I really like this story however, I need to point out that newts are taken in their 7th year, not their 6th year. Other than that, it's a great story.
Wonderful as always!!! I eagerly await your next chapter.