Please make this story light up in fire, make it the dirtiest story you can make! I beg of you! This chapter was in the middle of normal and dirty but add MUCH more of the dirty acts from draco!
I love this story! I can not wait to see who is causing all of this drama. By chance are you going to bring in Greyback and his lot ? Also what is going to happen to Draco and Hermione? They didn't say that little spiel they were supposed to after taking the potion. I am so ready for the next chapter.
I go through phases where I review all the time, but I also go through phases when I never review. I've been that phase of a bit. But after reading your author's note I felt I needed to offer support. For the life of me I can't understand why people ever flame fics. As you said, don't like it, don't read it. You know these same people don't write screne writers about tv shows or movies.
I'm enjoying your fic and look forward to more (plot and sex included).
Let's start by saying I am enjoying your fic. So your detractors can take a long walk off a short pier. I agree with Harry that Hermione is definitely NOT being herself but I am sure that will be explained as the story progresses.
I've read the story up to this point, and while it's good I can't do it anymore. Draco has been nothing but controlling, and abusive. I don't care if he took Hermione's virginity (which was rape), I can't believe that she would allow him to contiue to abuse her, and just write it off. Now, I understand it can be easy to get into thoe relationships, and fail to see it, but I think Hermione would. He put her to sleep, and she's just okay with it because she was going "mental?" I guess Hermione is far to OCC for me in this...
Maybe Lucius wasn't really at the ball and was polyjuiced by someone else? Or is he just a pervy guy? This is an exciting crime whodunnit with lots of other themes swirling about, too. Loving every word.
I must say that I feel the same water about abortions that you seem to. I know some people who have made that decision and I know their reasons and still given the options they had in their place I still do not feel like I could do it.
Very good chapter! I like how you're tying all the parts together a little at a time. I do like the possessive over-protective Draco. I feel like that's exactly how he would act. And the part where he's insisting she have someone go into the bathroom with her or he will- perfect and also too funny. I can just picture that!! Oh- and the lemons at the beginning- very nice :)
What a fabulous story this continues to be! I keep vacillating on whether I think Draco really loves Hermione or has some devious plot in mind. After the vow he agreed to take, I think it's a combination of both. I must say again that your sex scenes are unbelievably hot. I love how you portray Draco and his amazing libido.
I love your Draco. Thanks for the update!!!