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for The Dare

by Tassanaburrfoot

schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh draco, you should be glad to have Pansy on your side.
Even though you have motives you seem to be growing softer hahah - loved it
person shaine
schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this story. I want more... I'm greedy! I love the way you write them all. I want Draco and Hermione to stay together forever... not too much angst please. And now you have me wanting good things for Lav. I hope Draco and Harry become friendly... especially seeing what a skeez Ron is. What sweet revenge on Ron... Hermione with Draco. Harry friends with Slytherins. And Lavender with someone willing to be baby daddy.
person Jessica
schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! What I am most looking forward to at this point in the story is Ginny's Revenge! How will she do it? When will it sneak up on Ron? I don't know, but your brilliant mind will concoct something amazing!
schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hermione and Lavender as friends.... Need to digest that one.

A bit more smut would be fine yes...
person pickles87
schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter.
Enjoyed very much.
Hopefully Draco will stop being so paranoid.
Pansy is right. If no one is bothering Hermione she will know something is up.
Ultimately, he needs to demonstrate that being a 1st generation witch/wizard is a good thing.
waiting for more.
person Mady
schedule January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't feel too bad for the Greengrasses, but I am curious how it will play out.
schedule January 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well you explained the OOC- ness of Draco, he didn't think her mudblood status was of concern.
Hermione should become a bit more feisty.

Smut and harcore stuff doesn't faze me but the rape felt out of place. But that's just my perception...

person Leti001
schedule January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wasn't expecting that update, but loved it. I am so addicted to this story'. I love scary obsessive Draco. And didn't feel at all sorry for the Greengrass' I can't wait until Hermione wakes up and he is able to talk to her. It feels weird to think they've only been dating 4 days. But a good weird. Great update and live this story. Can't wait for more!
person Pinster
schedule January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I get the feeling that the retribution dealt upon the Greengrass sisters may cause repercussions........but I can't wait to read the mouthful that Hermione gives Draco for putting her to sleep.
schedule January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Heaven help Draco if Hermione ever finds out what he did to the Greengrass twits. And for once I really feel sorry for Lavender. Ron should have to bear as much punishment as Lavender.