rate_review Reviews

Your writing is excellent, but I have to admit that I'm not sure I'm going to continue reading. I hate what your Draco is developing into. A little manipulative and dark was good, but now he's just a glorified rapist. Again though, it isn't your that's a turn off, just the direction. Good luck with your future writing!

He's definitely getting more possessive, isn't he and tyre a time and a place Draco!!! I think I would have knocked him out!!! Haha

wow as a whole this fic honestly just sucks

(chapter 5)
Well, given I'm a Hufflepuff, I do feel a bit bad for the Greenglass sisters. I agree with the 'eye for an eye', but wow, what was done with Astoria... Yeah, definitely showed how much of a sick bastard Draco can me.

BTW, I'm loving Parkison in this story. She's pretty cool and laid back. She and Draco almost seem like siblings to me :)

Loving this fic! It's my current favorite and is quality writing!

Quality writing and a great plot. Keep it up!

Love this story!!! Can't wait for more chapters!!!

I can see that you'd want Hermione to be opposed to abortion because it would indicate that Draco could easily trap her into marriage by getting her pregnant, but her commentary makes no sense. If Hermione's mother took her to a British family planning clinic, she'd know that it's not dangerous. Actually, a woman is more likely to die in childbirth than she is to die from complications arising from a first trimester abortion. I could see the magical world being opposed to abortion for fear of losing a potentially magical offspring, and it seems like that alone would produce enough social pressure on a witch - even a half blood or muggleborn - to not terminate a pregnancy.

I know it's only been a few days more than usual for your update but I was getting severe withdrawal symptoms.....haha

I'm getting the impression that Hermione knows and understands far more about Draco and his actions than she is willing to share with her friends but I am so glad for what Pansy reminded Draco of, hopefully that will help him to trust Hermione a little more so that he can open up to her instead of trying to manipulate each and every situation that she may have any involvement in.......that is a sure fire way of losing a strong and
intelligent woman in the end.

I like how you portrayed Hermione in this chapter. She was very mature and kind. It definitely highlights her positive traits. Draco is quite the beau...he's out to protect her against any and all. Ron is a complete idiot...in any case, I hope to read the next installment soon. Thanks for sharing!