Honestly this story so fckun great. You even wrote very well every sex scene. But, I thought you wrote so many conversations that not necessary and the I think, this is Hermione Granger, the brightest witch, but the conversations are quite unlogic sometimes. Like the end of the chapter 15th, about virginity while discuss with Draco, or the discussion about virginity with Lucius, and the rape question, I thought she already promised to Daphne. Overall this quite interesting story. Good job.
Really great fic
can’t wait for more
​​​​​​I do love the story. I hope you continue writing the sory. I have shocked me with parts and made me laugh with parts. You hae made cry with parts also. I can't wait for more. I do hope that Draco can keep Monie safe from his father. It scares me that Lucius is wanting to take Monie a way from Draco. Harry has reason to worry about Lucius. I hope Cissy figures out what Lucius is thinkin about Monie. I really want to know if the killer is caught and they are safe from harm. If Lucius, Cissy, Draco, and the others in the order are smart they will take to hiding in the fortress with Monie in light of Voldemort coming back. I also want to know if Daphine's sister is the one that killed her. ​​​​
Not working for me. It was a lot of fun at first and you have plenty of writing skill, but your version of Draco is a controlling manipulative tosser and I hate him. I don't believe that Hermione would put up with this treatment, and it's probably going to get worse before it gets better, so I'm calling it quits here.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! I'm addicted to this story
This is an amazing story. I love the dynamic between Draco and Lucius and that they both share an obsession for the same girl, for much the same reasons. I would love to read some of Hermione's fantasies about Lucius, she would have to have them.
I can't wait for the next chapter? When will it be out? I try to see when this story was last updated but Im not able to lol. It's driving me crazy. Can take months :o
and I was enjoying it so.
Pls update soon, lol !
good chapter
good chapter
good chapter