Lalani,
Thank you for the update. This took you absolutely forever. I was checking on it occasionally, I do hope you are well.
Nice chapter, feels like the beginning of the rest of their life. Really nice.
Waiting for more.
Fox xx
Lalani, I've very much enjoyed this story and hope you will continue with it. Looking forward to seeing more chapters.
Chapter 18.
I really liked this chapter, BUT the story is not really finished, is it?
I do hope you will come back and continue :-)
Thank you for all the fun
Fox xx
Hello again :-)
Chapters 13-15. So I was right :) but I'm surpriced to find out who was behind it...
I always thought, Headmaster was a cunning, meddling and secretive old man, but in your story he's also unfair bastard, who would stop at nothing to get, what he wants. Tut, tut. Bad, bad Headmaster. I guess that makes things more interesting ;-) I do hope he gets what he deserves in the end.
Thanks
Fox xx
Chapters 16-17.
Ha! Albus got a slap. Good.
Very sexy chapters, lots of great sex -Snape is still a monster in bed... ... oh well, some women are lucky.
Glad Draco spoke to his sister, it's good they have each other, but he really needs to get Ron out of her head. Ron is just not good enough... especially not your Ron.
Thanks
Fox xx
This story intrigues me. I look foward to seeing more. :3
Chapter 7.
Traditional apprenticeship...well isn't that just deliciously perverted? Hahahaha And how come, that nosy Ministry must know all details...
Thanks
Fox xx
Sex was hot ;-)
Well, if Snape is going to get hard again so fast, Hernione won't be able to walk in few hours...and he must be one "lean, mean, Slytherin, sex machine" yum!
Fox xx
Chapter 9.
Nice bath ;-)
And Draco thing. Well, let me just say, that I feel sorry for "your" Lucius for having to endure all this marriage of his...shame, really. Poor Draco too, not knowing his own sister (half sister)
Fox xx
Chapters 10-12.
These three chapters were very hot, very sexy and extremely arousing (although Snape seems to be hard non stop -a lovely thought, but hardly believable), shame Draco and Lucius came over so early...
It's absolutely lovely to see friendship between Hermione and Draco, I like the fact, they became so close, even though everyone else thinks badly of him. It seems, she is closer to him, than to others (Harry, Ron and Ginny)...curious.
Fox