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for Children of the Sun

by Lomonaaeren

person djaddict
schedule July 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This series is so much fun, I love it. 

I lol'd over the ending. 

person Foop
schedule June 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, I look forward to how it develops :)
person moon
schedule March 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Please continue it. :)
person djaddict
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Harry was completely brilliant! I love how he handled it.

I was so happy to read that you might keep expanding this, I love it.
schedule January 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely lovely, and I think captured the personalities of those two pretty accurately when they were children. Same two people meet - different situation - and somehow it works out entirely differently.
person Hestia
schedule December 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved the familiars. I would love to see what happens through their lives.
person Elsecaller
schedule December 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was such a good story. You nailed the mood perfectly. Please consider developing this to a novel. This was to good to let be just this. Awesome work.
person SP777
schedule December 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This little one shot has the potential of being a good full length story :-)
person djaddict
schedule December 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome! Fantastic universe to read.