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for Children of the Sun

by Lomonaaeren

person moodysavage
schedule December 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

ah I like this story and I like how everyone except Ron and Draco ended up in different houses.

One line though had Harry's snake staring at Draco with eyes like rubies but Golden's eyes are green. (chap 3)

'escorregadia reggio' (your review post code this time lol)

person moodysavage
schedule December 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

'He just hoped the boy liked potions.' lol Oh that like is so funny coming from Severus.

person djaddict
schedule December 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So great seeing an addition to this story. I love how  Harry is making people he interacts with think.

person staar
schedule December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

ok so harry is already changing things, good for him !!!!!!! thanks for the update !! hope there is more to come :)calle

person anon
schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this story is one of my favorites by far. i would to see many more chapters. it has so much potential.
person Jan
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Interesting start, please update chapter 5 soon.

schedule August 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The concept of this story is extremely fascinating! And I really like your writing style, I hope you will write more stories set in this universe. 

person staar
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

wow this is getting better and better with each update, hope to see more soon :):):)

schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I loved this theme you have going. It feels like it would fit right in with Rowling's Hogwarts. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

person BAFan
schedule July 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ch. 3

Very, very interesting!

 

~Debbie