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for Children of the Sun

by Lomonaaeren

person Jan
schedule January 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That's t Severus, don't blindly trust the headmaster! Pleas update chapter 13 soon.

schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome update!! This story is getting so interesting. I really like Harry's characterization in this - it's very different from any others I've ever read. Can't wait to read more! 

schedule December 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hope you can update this one soon!!

person staar
schedule December 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

hope he does not do anything to Hermione cause Harry will have a fit.....thanks for the update !!!!! yeap like you said don't like Narissa she's not that good...hope Harry changes her...and what is up with Dubbledork not wanting to help ( but that is what he does)!!

schedule November 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love where you have been going with this story so far, and I am hoping that the word complete on the description is some sort of mistake.  There is so much more I want to see from this story.  Please continue it as soon as you are able.  The characters are all changed, but yet you have kept them as true to the original work in terms of personality as possible.  This is truly a fascinating work.  Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

person Jan
schedule November 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hmm, I see, convert Narcissa into Harry's ways, it sounds very intriguing. Please update chapter 10 soon.

person Jan
schedule November 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That's fine, if Narcissa's gonna be a manipulative bi...... witch then the greater the pleasure will be when she's under great torturous pain! 😈muahahahahaha 

Please update chapter 9 soon.

person Jan
schedule November 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It seems like I'm really not gonna like this Narcissa. I hope Harry doesn't fall for her motherly facade, please update chapter 8 soon.

schedule August 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love these little snippets and hope you'll continue them.

person Jan
schedule December 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Poor Severus, being told off by a boy! But I'm so happy Harry did, he was in the right, this is what all children in the world want to do and say to their teachers that think it's ok to bully their own students. Please update chapter 6 soon.