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about #17... They're like young married couple, aren't they? .....and it was a grey, feisty cockatoo. Constantly butted heads with me, until he escaped during a move from my old apartment years ago. I kinda blame my mom for that, she didn't really care for that bird.

That was soo beautiful. YUS! Got 2 kisses hehe. I love you you described something as simple as bathing in a beautiful, intimate way.

Such a sweet, loving chapter! I must read it again.

about #16... Well this was cute! :-) ...makes me think about the bird I used to have.

I missed 2 chapters while I was away. I felt so happy to catch up though, love the thought of Hermione being a little dark and how Harry was after the duel. Hehe can I get another kiss? Haha so cheeky.

about #15... Well that was the best 'bird' fight I've ever read. :-) Now for the fussing over from Draco...

Love the plot and how you write!

Loved this chapter. Both hearwarming, funny and a little scary how serious Hermione was about helping Draco kill the Dursleys. Easy to forget that Hermione has a vengeful side. Glad that she is so calm about the fact that Harry and Draco are mates and is happy for him. “You don’t think we should break the law?” Testig’s eyes were narrowed, little sparks of blue sometimes showing between the lids. “I’m a sodding Auror. Of course not.” Harry has shown the patience of a saint but it's nice to see him start to call out the other Veela on their brutality, even if they feel its justified, the fact that they still don't seem to get that he doesn't know all there little rules and getting on his case when he trips up and there double standards and abuse of the law Can't wait too see him cut loose on Testig and poor Draco is gonna be beside himself with worry but at least he is letting Harry do this on his own terms and not trying to hold him back. Curious whether the teacher has considered the political ramifications if she actually harms or heaven forbid kills Harry in there duel and just how much heat will come down on not only her and the school but quite possibly all Veela. -waits patiently for the next chapter-

OMG! I need the next chapter! I'm so hyped to read it! Awesome chapter by the way!

about #14... Yep! That's good ole' Harry, give him an inch and he'll take the 100 yards! Hope he knows what he's doing.