I'm so glad I finally managed to find this again, and that it was finished! As I put when I first read it, this is funny and sweet and nicely developed. I like how Harry hates his fame and what a difference that makes to how he views being Veela. And Draco is so sweet!
The extra chapter is very lovely too. Awesome job! SP
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Conclusion...
To be that independent on a individual, I honestly couldn't see myself doing that UNLESS I was born a Veela. Personally I think I have some willpower to stand on my own and not be dependent on someone else.
Anyway, nice to see Draco's side of things...also it would have been nice to touch on 'why' he wanted to be a transformed Veela tho', get more insight.
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about the end...
This was a nice [sometimes lovey dovey] story, glad to see they had made progress.
Awesome :)
I like the way you put Draco's determination onto Harry at the beginning. Great story.
What a wonderful tale! Lovely! Loved every minute of it. Thank you for sharing!
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about #34...
You know, it just occured to me, you've gotten quite good at writing Harry & Draco as mates, but what about doing a story as them as husbands, it shouldn't be any different just they wouldn't be...non-human. Ever thought of that, the whole marriage fiasco?
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about 33..
Do you want to make that scene from Draco's POV a request for an Advent fic? Sure...
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about #32...
To be honest, I would have loved to have seen this from Draco's POV...what he was feeling.
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about #31..
I'm actually looking forward to when they CAN be apart! They remind me of a couple that's too lovey-dovey...we need more action from outside influences.
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about #30..
That was nice drama there & a fitting punishment played out...right to the point.