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for His Relinquishment

by lexiatel

person jen7 - thank u, was a total shock I by chance came to the sight and jumped with joy. it's getting real now the tide is turning we need more draco and hermione argue and fight
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM


 

schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh lordy I can't wait too find out what malfoy does and Hermione....wow! Looking forward too more!

schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh! Is 'Voldemort' a taboo word in this fic? If so, death eaters are coming! 

I was surprised at Draco's cowardly behaviour, given that he's appeared to be rather strong(struggling for the right word) in the fic so far. Is it the spell? I almost thought it was Sam (the kid) instead of Draco aha.

Ugh, I really want Blaise to die, but I also want him to live. Not because I like him! That would be weird aha. He adds a special type of humour and entertainment to the chapters I think, and him with Bernie are my favourite interactions all up. 

Omg, fk Jordan aha, Bernie can abort the baby if she wants to! I don't like Jordan now, but I loved her in the last chapter aha. Although it was kind to remove her memories (perhaps.) but just what's the catch there? 

Harry is my favourite ever so I hope he wins! Also, I am hoping Draco dies too, but know that's really unlikely. 

AKxx

person Louanne
schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I don't know if you have plans for Bernice's new love interest, but if not or if you're still not sure, can I make a litlle request ? Would you consider shipping her with Harry ? it would be lovely to see her trying (but maybe not totally) to heal from her scars (Blaise and her ex what's his name) and falling in love with a man like Harry.

He would never abuse her, or betrayed her, and yes she's pretty badass, she can stand without men, it's just a suggestion, besides it's your story.

Besides, I'm tired to see him with Ginny... just no.

schedule September 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

A few things!

Ok, so with The Wizard-Born Muggle, it's a sequel to The Pureblood Squib, so might not make much sense at times if you haven't read the first installment. And! You honestly have no idea how happy and giddy I was to see that you reviewed my story. I have been a fan since I read your OC fics a while back, and to say I 'fangirled' ... well, I'll just it at that aha.

To your fic! I love love love love (!!!!!!) that Jordan is a woman! I really was expecting a guy, and freaked out when it was revealed that's she's a badass woman. Amazing moment. I haven't even finished reading the chapter yet! I had to stop at that moment and review. 

Ok, i just read the rest and if you bring back Harry I may just drop dead. In a good way. 

Such a plot twist! (a good one!)

I love Bernie btw. Go her! 

AKxx

person jen7- harry's back!!!!. please update soon, my mind is spinning with the different plots you may have.
schedule September 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM


 

person jen7 - awesome story can't wait for hermione to get back to the good fight
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM


 

person Silversal
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

WTF?! What the hell is going on now?! LoL it's like the 'Twilight zone' up is down and Hermione has changed and for the better, I really thought she was going fight long/hard (that's what she said! LoL) with the curse/spell or be faking it to get access to the  Library, that would have been nice to see but I trust your judgment as a great writer. Keep up the awesome work hope to see something soon.

-silversal

person Anonymous
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I for the 'not' next to Hermione name in my review. It's still an awesome story. 😜

-silversal

person Anonymous
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

And the 'got' in forgot lol 😂😖🙄 sorry.

-Silversal