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Uh oh...no, that was too easy. Something bad coming, isn't there? Poor Hermione. Fight girl, fight!

Blaise is such a slut, hahaha.
It'll take a while for Draco to come around.

What a great story! I'm really enjoying this, although I do hope Hermione doesn't stay completely powerless throughout. I'm really looking forward to reading more!

This is for Chapter 3. The site has been wonky that it took AGES to load on my laptop. Anyway I feel like you have done a good job describing an angry and violent Draco. You have given us the logic behind his hating her. I don't think it will get better anytime but I will be here for the ride.

Well...Draco is a bastard; he is an evil little cockroach.

This is for Chapter 4. Well, it is a bit gross how degrading Hermione is. I don't like how "weak" Hermione seems. She can't even fight back against Draco. Regardless of the collar and him having a wand but her not having one, it is a bit disappointing she is acting like this. She is not docile or completely obedient, but she doesn't seem to have much fire left in her. Lol, I agree with another reviewer that Blaise is a slut. I also liked how you explained why Hermione got first place. Draco is starting to realize he needs her alive, but he doesn't care for her yet. The scene where Draco stared at her body seems like the beginning of him falling into this downward spiral in this bout to keep her. He doesn't seem possessive of her yet, but I feel it will change soon. Great job though.

Where's poor Samuel?

Love the plot, but something is missing, maybe a bit more descriptiveness? A bit more feeling.... not sure if my comment makes sense...

I love this twist on the marriage law trope! I doubt Hermione will react well to finding out that they're really married.

Like to see what You have in store for This Dramione!