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for His Relinquishment

by lexiatel

schedule February 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I check every day to see if you've updated this story!
schedule February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This fic. is one of the best dark fics I've read so far. I liked the way you handled the rape scene: they are both victims of Voldemort's world. I also liked the way you describe the characters. I find Hermione and Draco quite in canon. I just hope you will not abandon this fic. because it' so good, I loved it.
person ElleB
schedule February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody brilliant! Please tell me you are still working on this and haven't stopped at chapter 10! This story deserves completion :)
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to your next update. Your writing still is very eloquent and descriptive. Can not wait to read more. I have to read more! (:
person raevynstarr
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Having a rape scene is always a touchy subject and never pleasant but I did find it interesting how you wrote it. I was pleasantly surprised to see that Draco, in a sense, was just as much of a rape victim as Hermione was. So, job well done on taking that route, because now I feel you've left yourself an opening if you plan on making Draco a redeemable character.
person jen7
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this is one of thr best fics I have read in a while. please don't abandon it. finish it. it's too good. love love love it.
schedule January 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was intense. Can't wait to see where it goes next.
person Asha
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It could have been much worse. ;) D was as kind as he could be.
person Angel baby 10
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well...at least they are still alive...that counts for something! Very dark and disturbing but not in a bad way! You do a great job of portraying this dark tense mood.
person Anna
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
For the love of all that's unholy, this was intense!