schedule
January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if you were trying to use different words or spelled the ones you were trying to use wrong, but it you were you trying different words you used them wrong.
partite for petite
percale for parcel
past for passed
right full for rightful
all ways for always
after wards for afterwards
You have a lot of other mistakes as well. I suggest reading what you wrote out loud that way you may hear your mistakes. Other than that, your story was a good. I enjoyed reading it.
partite for petite
percale for parcel
past for passed
right full for rightful
all ways for always
after wards for afterwards
You have a lot of other mistakes as well. I suggest reading what you wrote out loud that way you may hear your mistakes. Other than that, your story was a good. I enjoyed reading it.
schedule
December 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, though the last chapter sounded like it didn't quite fit....it sounded like a different story, a good one, but not the same considering Draco was blind (not their son) and Harry & Draco weren't together...... I was very confused about what was going on......anyway if this is a different story then I would really like to read it sometime....