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Wouldn't remus recognise HP scent - he was around him as a baby?

Totally engrossed in it from start to finish. Can't wait to read more. I'm curious if Remus might recognize him closer to the moon, and if Hank will ever get Sirius to name the Dursleys

Please update chapter 18 soon.

Thank you for your incredible update! I am so glad that Sirius and Harry's date went so well. Thank goodness Dumbledore, or the Weasleys, didn't stick their noses into his private time. Excellent new chapter! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season and a Happy and safe New Year!

This story (like all your others) is superbly written with a great storyline and good development of the characters - bring on the next date and make it hot.

OMG I missed so much !!!! so glad to see that Harry helped Black out !!!! Thanks for all the updates !!! :):)merry x-mss !!

I wonder if Remus will recognize Hank (Harry) by his scent since Remus is a werewolf?

I doubt Sirius would expect Hank to relax enough at HQ to hop into bed so its nice that this feels like an honest thank you and dinner to enjoy each other's company rather than a booty call. Especially since introducing Remus is kind of like introducing the family. Now, how is Remus' nose and would there actually be anything to make him think of Lily and James? Is his discovery going to solely hinge on some random mention of the Dursleys? I'm kind of hoping its a bit more involved but mainly that Hank realizes it -- even if he is with Sirius at the time -- rather than Remus and Sirius cornering him after some epiphany. I suppose if he knew the name of the Dursleys without hearing it from Sirius, that would be the first step of proof....

The battle was interesting to observe and it was good Yama and Hank helped out - it's interesting to see the slow burn developing between Sirius and Hank. I imagine it is about to get really hot very soon, (and I can't wait)

You use the word "bits" with far too much frequency in your writing. Using the same word or phrase too repetitively can be really off-putting to a reader. This is meant to be constructive criticism and I hope it helps.