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for Backfire

by SpeedyTomato

person Cryptex
schedule January 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Really well written :)

schedule September 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

That freaking buildup! I love it. 

person staar
schedule October 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Glad to see you back somewhat and hope all goes well with you !!!!...happy with the update, nice to see harry / balck into eachother...also nice to see snape talking with minnie and hope all goes well there !!!!!! thanks and stay healthly !!!!!!!!

person Tiffany
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story can't wait for an update

person rigger42
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

*fans self*  Whew!   

 

LOL. These two desperately need a spell to get their clothes off.  Of course, in their frenzy who knows what they might vanish?  Hee.

I can see the possibility of someone casting the horcrux identification spell and spilling over onto Hank at some point...I'm sure he'd scoff at the idea that a person could hold a soul piece.
I'd rather that than Lucius find out anything...

It would be rather baffling for Hank though, since he doesn't have the first clue about being Harry.  Without looking back...I can't recall why he doesn't have the scar on his forehead. 

One thing about Sirius, though, is I don't think it would be all that much of a stumbling block to a relationship, now that he and the others know Hank.  The picture in their heads of Harry is stuck pretty much at a little boy even if they intellectually know his age.

 

person Anonymous
schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for your outstanding new chapter!  It's wonderful that Sirius and Hank are getting along so well, but Lucius is getting scary.  Hopefully Harry will remember to hide his house.  It would also protect him from the "light" side.  Wonderful update!  Can't wait to see what will happen next!

person Anonymous
schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omg why must it end there so far?! Lol love this story I cannot wait to see how everything goea, I worry about how Hank and Sirius relationship will change once he finds out that Hank is Harry. It feels like a storm is coming lol. But anyways keep up the awesome work and update soon ^.^

 

-too lazy to sign in Sara101

person Jan
schedule March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's good that everyone is working together to help Hank with Lucius, please update chapter 19 soon.
person autumngold
schedule March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Lucius is a jerk. Poor Narcissa, she must be so disgusted with the man she married. Hopefully her lovers are all willing. Thank you for your excellent new chapter! Wonderful story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
person staar
schedule March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
man would love to see Harry's bird get to Malfoy, that would be a great read there !!!!! thanks !!!!!