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January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
love it next chapter soon please!!!
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January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have NO issue with the length of your chapters -- I just prefer longer series as a whole, which is generally coupled with longer chapters, but that is not always the case :)
And I'm rereading Shiloe before I get in to the sequel, and I still love it :) so you have a bit of time before I demand more chapters (I'll be nice and give you a week? Jokes!)
It's understandable that it's hard to write -- it obviously touches on some sensitive topics for you (from what I've read of the notes you've added). I think it's awesome you can share them. I honestly tend to avoid fic's that are centred around my disorders as I live with them daily and read to get away from my own life.
What's "brand new man"? Help feed my addiction!!! :p
Def excited to see where this goes. But I have to ask (not a criticism, but a query); if Harry's wings meant he was royalty, why hasn't anyone they met along the line in the town been told? Why no fan-fair -- no spoilers pls -- but it just seemed a bit of an underwhelming reaction and was wondering if there was a reason :)
Also, will you have them going back and forth with their training and Hogwarts and dates, or will the next few chaps be only training / being with the elves? Cause from your comments I was kinda worried it would just be training and that can end up kinda tedious, may need to break it up with other stuff... Just my opinion tho (you can tell me where to shove it tho -- it's your story :P lol)
And I'm rereading Shiloe before I get in to the sequel, and I still love it :) so you have a bit of time before I demand more chapters (I'll be nice and give you a week? Jokes!)
It's understandable that it's hard to write -- it obviously touches on some sensitive topics for you (from what I've read of the notes you've added). I think it's awesome you can share them. I honestly tend to avoid fic's that are centred around my disorders as I live with them daily and read to get away from my own life.
What's "brand new man"? Help feed my addiction!!! :p
Def excited to see where this goes. But I have to ask (not a criticism, but a query); if Harry's wings meant he was royalty, why hasn't anyone they met along the line in the town been told? Why no fan-fair -- no spoilers pls -- but it just seemed a bit of an underwhelming reaction and was wondering if there was a reason :)
Also, will you have them going back and forth with their training and Hogwarts and dates, or will the next few chaps be only training / being with the elves? Cause from your comments I was kinda worried it would just be training and that can end up kinda tedious, may need to break it up with other stuff... Just my opinion tho (you can tell me where to shove it tho -- it's your story :P lol)
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January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Would not have pegged Lucius as air. It's probably more powerful than any of them realize. :) hope your new years was fun!
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January 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love the fact that they each have a different elemental power, this could help them against Voldy when the time comes, please update chapter 9 soon.
Oh and Happy New Year!🎉
Oh and Happy New Year!🎉
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January 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Haha, she called Severus Young one :D
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December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I absolutely love that devious plan of matching the chocolates flavor with Harry's scent😃 Please update chapter 8 soon.
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December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't until I posted my reply that I realised this is aff not ao3 :P
In my fic I try to make chapter roughly the same but sometimes you just need to finish a scene or you want to link a bunch of scenes together, and the next thing you know your 2k chapter is now 7k and you're trying to see how you can break it up in the smaller lumps ;)
I love the idea of the chocolates!! And I was hoping for a nice sexy scene but then Harry so sweetly reminded me (and Lucius) that there was no kissing etc and I could totally feel for Lucius! :P
We need more dates! What happens in date 4!?!?!? *drives self mad waiting!*
And I just saw you added a new chapter for Shiloe 2! I hadn't touched it because I was afraid you had stopped it. I get to read it now :D
In my fic I try to make chapter roughly the same but sometimes you just need to finish a scene or you want to link a bunch of scenes together, and the next thing you know your 2k chapter is now 7k and you're trying to see how you can break it up in the smaller lumps ;)
I love the idea of the chocolates!! And I was hoping for a nice sexy scene but then Harry so sweetly reminded me (and Lucius) that there was no kissing etc and I could totally feel for Lucius! :P
We need more dates! What happens in date 4!?!?!? *drives self mad waiting!*
And I just saw you added a new chapter for Shiloe 2! I hadn't touched it because I was afraid you had stopped it. I get to read it now :D
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December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't until I posted my reply that I realised this is aff not ao3 :P
In my fic I try to make chapter roughly the same but sometimes you just need to finish a scene or you want to link a bunch of scenes together, and the next thing you know your 2k chapter is now 7k and you're trying to see how you can break it up in the smaller lumps ;)
I love the idea of the chocolates!! And I was hoping for a nice sexy scene but then Harry so sweetly reminded me (and Lucius) that there was no kissing etc and I could totally feel for Lucius! :P
We need more dates! What happens in date 4!?!?!? *drives self mad waiting!*
And I just saw you added a new chapter for Shiloe 2! I hadn't touched it because I was afraid you had stopped it. I get to read it now :D
In my fic I try to make chapter roughly the same but sometimes you just need to finish a scene or you want to link a bunch of scenes together, and the next thing you know your 2k chapter is now 7k and you're trying to see how you can break it up in the smaller lumps ;)
I love the idea of the chocolates!! And I was hoping for a nice sexy scene but then Harry so sweetly reminded me (and Lucius) that there was no kissing etc and I could totally feel for Lucius! :P
We need more dates! What happens in date 4!?!?!? *drives self mad waiting!*
And I just saw you added a new chapter for Shiloe 2! I hadn't touched it because I was afraid you had stopped it. I get to read it now :D
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December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uhmm, candy that tastes like harry....
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December 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You can get updates?!?
You're the only one I get updates for - and that's cause of your yahoo group.
Woot! The little fae guys came back in! Yay! Xmas prezzie for me ;)
That seemed like a really short chapter... Or was it just cause I'm dying for some more Lucius x Harry action? I want to see more dates and see it all happen, but I do appreciate waiting and drawing it out ;)
You're the only one I get updates for - and that's cause of your yahoo group.
Woot! The little fae guys came back in! Yay! Xmas prezzie for me ;)
That seemed like a really short chapter... Or was it just cause I'm dying for some more Lucius x Harry action? I want to see more dates and see it all happen, but I do appreciate waiting and drawing it out ;)