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for The Quickening

by Desert_Sea

person LeWyKi
schedule January 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, and there I had just thought it was all going far too smoothly, for the last two chapters. Just then that annoying 'outside world' intrudes. Still, you give a new meaning to fast and thanks so very much for these latest chapters :-)
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You just wrapped up a boat-load of story in that one chapter. How many more chapters are you planning?
I love the whole turn of events with the Galvanismus. Who needs expensive serum when you can just fuck your way to younger skin. Marvelous plot twist. See, I had no idea that was coming. Totally obscured.
And now I like the unicorn comparison even more.

My favorite non-sex scene this time was when she came to tell him about the curse in the middle of class. His reaction was perfect.
My first favorite line is from that scene. The rest were chosen for cleverness, amusement-factor, and description deliciousness.

Gods! She
person Sal05
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Keep it up, I'm hoping become the greatest healer of all time because of this. She like a super hero now lol, I've watching super hero shows lately ;p can't wait to see how the story wraps-up. Good luck!
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking hot.
With this she could be an awsome Healer in the future.
You should write 200 chapters :D
person DawnEB
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am very tardy in reviewing a fic which has drawn me in, but I'm loving the plot/smut balance and writing. Some very nice ideas throughout, and I'm interested in how this new version of the curse/blessing is going to affect things, especially as it sounds like it doesn't effect the aging of the internal organs. I laughed at the boy look v girl look, then Severus' preening when he paid attention. I just wanted to add that seeing Hermione's reaction to book-lined walls always reminds me of this particular comic strip http://www. sinfest. net/view.php?date=2006-12-09 :D (I don't know about links, so remove the couple of spaces I added to view)
person LeWyKi
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Lovely Chapter...and suddenly the big, bad, scary curse doesn't appear quite that bad - rather useful, even and a tiny bit mysterious :-)
A happy new year to you and I hope, you had a nice celebration with people you like. As always, I'm looking forward to every new chapter you like to grace us with and it is really great how you keep up the frequent chapters.
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20: You definitely answered my questions! And I finally get the unicorn reference! The magic he could feel against his hands was the curse in her skin! Very clever. When Hermione tries to tell Snape that she has the curse without letting anyone in on it, I was reminded of Harry trying to tell Snape that Sirius was in the Department of Mysteries in OotP. I just had to smile when Severus let Hermione order and drag him around his own living quarters. And how she kept getting distracted by his books, his bed, and his bathtub.
Chapter 21: I appreciate that Draco has a good sense of humor and isn't such a prat about people insulting him. Severus also seems calmer, though maybe it's the consistent sex.
schedule December 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome for the kind words, I meant them. I apologize again for not reviewing for so long, I'll do better.
As always, the sex is fantastic. I loved the letter writing scene too, so sweet yet with a hint of snarky, rambling Severus. And then oh shit! Oh fuck! Did Hermione inherit the curse from Severus?? Or maybe it's changed and become something good? I'm hoping for just a curse that allows you to heal others rather than one that keeps you alive when you're dying and causes fugue states. I'll just have to wait and see.
schedule December 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You are so freakin fast. It's like Christmas keeps coming and coming, and I like chapter presents the best.

Love the homage. A good reaming gets me every time.

I, obviously, loved the sex this chapter (and the letter); but I liked the scene with Harry too. I can't wait to see what happens next. (If it were me, I'd need repeated bouts of pussy-licking to calm me down after such a shock.) (Mwhahahaha.)

There was a good dose of sweetness in this chapter, and I like how it contrasted with the urgency of the ending. Lull your readers into cozy cocoon and then slap them in the face with a smelly, wet fish of revelation. I like your style
schedule December 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And now?? Poor Hermione, happy day upset again by the darn curse!!