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I had to save reading this for later in the day so I'd have something to look forward to after editing all day. So worth it.

The strobe light scene was awesome. The writing was vivid and the images were hot. Brilliant.

"eyebrow semaphore" Oh my god. Yes. This is definitely one of my top three favorite lines from you. Perfection.

"Each time the light flashed on, her sensual movements leapt out at him like some sort of erotic clockwork doll." And "luminous stop frame animation" I liked these both for their vividness. I could easily picture everything that was happening, and I particularly liked clockwork doll. That was excellent.

"...water droplets suddenly appeared to be falling in slow motion. Like levitating crystalline beads, they were deeply mesmerising and with the heat, steam and roar, created a multi-sensory disconnect that was both disconcerting and exhilarating." I enjoyed this whole thing, but I loved "appeared to be falling in slow motion," and "levitating crystalline beads." I don't know how you could have described this more accurately.

"Rocking back on her haunches she pumped him with her fist until he cried out, his spurts of come turning into slow motion projectiles that spattered her cheeks, mouth and the tiles behind her. His head pitched back against the wall as he pulled her up."
First I just love the idea of him coming on her and watching the spatter progress in the strobe. Also I like the word haunches. And I know you used pitched just to make my clit sing. Yesssss.

"Lap" This isn't the first time you've described Alan Rickman's speech pattern in way that made me want to come, but I thought I'd remember to mention it this time.

The whole part with his wand was lovely/brilliant. I so wanted to be Hermione. I also liked the playful competitiveness between them. It was both sweet and exactly how I would imagine them to be.

Okay, I have to go edit my chapter again. I'm about to go cross-eyed. I'm looking forward to your coming fish-slap.

I love your fic, once they got together everything was amazing!

I am absolutely loving this story.nice plot, great smut and my favourite pairing. What more could I want. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hiya! I am still reading, trying to catch up. Wow, you updated so quickly it's taking me quite awhile to devour and love on each and every chapter! But I wanted to drop a line and let you know this is one of the most interesting stories I've read in a long while. I've recc'd it to some folks, so hopefully you'll have more readers/reviewers. You're truly a natural if you're not doing much editing or beta'ing - and bonus - you make me have to look up a few words, and I consider myself well read/educated! You're from England, I take it? I always envy the British writers for knowing the cultural language piece, and the ins and outs of slang in your country. I tend to write too many "Americanisms" but, oh well. I'm an American and never had a long-term beta, so some of it is to be expected, as long as I try to filter it out. Anyway! What an interesting turn of events! Did she heal Harry on her own? I'll have to check it out in the next chapter. I wish I had time to sit and read all the way through, but alas this is a busy month for me, so I'll catch up as I am able. Hugs!

This was so freakin cute. I love the idea of them writing a sex book, sort of the Masters and Johnson of the wizarding world. All this cuddliness is going to make that fish slap even smellier.

Awww...he said Snapes! I love this story. It's so naughty but has just enough sweetness that makes you go awwwww.
I didn't see the sex book coming. I thought they were going to give the curse to Lucius or get back at him or something. But I liked where you went instead. I cant wait for the next chapter.

OMG! >,< do you understand how cool it to see that you replied to my lame review! I was literally Screaming like little fan girl at my phone lol. You have made my week thank you for and you Quicky updates. This story is like my new drug of Choice for 2016 thank you very much, i'm addicted now and I can only get my fix from you. Just have a lot of power now be gentle with us lol.

The story is awesome, keep up the great work again. Thank you again for this week's fix of your story. I just hope Ron doesn't get weird with her because she's getting all sexy now too, them being best friends and like a Brother to Hermione too. *keeping fingers crossed* >,<

Seriously? You updated again before I could review the chapter I read last night? Well, now you have to take them both in one big gang-bang review.

Chapter 21 was a pleasing combination of humor and sweetness. I'm sure you're getting ready for another fish-slap, but I like the valleys of your storytelling as much as the peaks. There's more sex in the valleys (but the peaks move the story along).

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Man, that mirror sex was hot! I liked the position, it shows off Severus's hidden strength. I'm interested to see what his thoughts are on what Lucius said to him in the bookstore. I wish you the best at work tomorrow!

A threesome with Lucius, that would be awesome! Just saying lol. Great work again, I had the talent/ skill to write as fast as you and make the plot make sense too. I'm just amazed by you. Keep it up! * cheers! *