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This chapter was beautifully written. I don't know which I enjoyed more, the satisfying resolution to their trials or the prose-porn.
I'm sure I could go back through and pick out more, but here's the stuff I noticed on my first read through.

So for now we're back to comfort, love and sunshine. Thank you so much for giving tose two a break, however long that may last :) There is after all a certain older albino ferret to deal with and the blessing in a curse. Also, who knows when the well meaning public may intrude again. Anyway, yes I do love to read and collect stories, but you are the first author I am actually kind of having a dialogue with - which is a nice new experience. As to the quote - that would be a german proverb and I'm not quite sure, where I heard it first. I think it might have been in a song or fairytale, but who knows. I always imagine some village and a stranger travelling through and working a "miracle" - Like the "Wizard of Oz". For me it is the affirmation to ignore "never" and "impossible", whenever I get to hear them.
Well, I also think the ability to write storys a miracle of its own, I only read and read and then read some more...

Omg was that the end? It seems like the end. If it is, I liked it. (I know you said one more so it'll probably be an epilogue)
They over came everything that they had been through to just worship and love each other. That makes me smile.
I'm glad you liked my last review. I meant every word. With stories like this, I will follow you always.

You should have posted a warning that I'd be laughing my ass off. In the most disturbing way possible, this was the funniest chapter. I mean it was fucking awful what was happening, but my sense of humor is just as comfortable with cognitive dissonance as the rest of me. I haven't laughed this hard at a story in ages. I think that says a lot about me. Or it says a lot about you.
You just love fucking with us, don't you? The more I think about, the more I think this chapter was a masterful roller coaster. You merged the two most horrendous characters from the story in a scene where they're essentially raping Snape. And then you made me laugh about it.
And then you wet fish slapped me at the end with Hermione.
Bravo.

All but two of my favorites this time were chosen for snort-factor.

"...less trouble post-mortem."

Everybody said it was impossible, after all - ask anyone, they all knew it was impossible. Then someone came along who did not know that - and he simply did it. - Anyway, Ijust went into hiding for the last few chapters, because yes, angst improves the plot, but it also is none too pleasant. Soooo, finally things are looking up, because, after all everyone knew, five was impossible. Right? Thank you for the new chapter. One question - maybe I mised it - where did Lucy go?

Ding dong, the witch is dead! Now he just has to get rid of Lucius. (I've just had a sudden flash of naked Severus stalking the halls of Malfoy Manor in search of Malfoy.) This chapter was actually extremely sweet (not counting the dub-con sex). His desire to rescue Hermione made my heart ache for him. I can't wait to see what happens next.

"...devour his face like a dementor." Great description

"...Violetta flytrap. His large hands swathed her backside, spreading her cheeks apart" You worked that in beautifully, and I just liked the sexual description after that (even though I hated who it was happening to).

"And so the purple psychopath was pinioned between them" This was both funny and p-p-p-perfect.

"...alternating their thrusts like they were working a pump trolley." I have often thought this, but I didn't know what those cars were called. Excellent description.

"...while they both frantically pumped into the screaming harlot between them

First of all I was freaking out because the review function was down all week but then as soon as you posted it was working again. Phew!
Thank you for clarifying the handcuff bit. That was a bit confusing but I get it now.:)
I don't like Violetta. She just seems so gross and blugh. Lucius and Severus together is always oh so yummy.
Man death by sex. What a way to go. Can I go that way?
Lastly any one who tells you that your writing is "disrespectful or trivialized the memory of Mr. Rickman", can go suck it. Your work is beautiful. And writing keeps his character alive. Fanfiction Severus Snape has been around longer then the movies and will continue to live on as long as there are talented and gifted writers out there like you who put out such lovely stories like this one. It's a tribute to his work and talent, NOT a desecration. So I say write on. Find inspiration through the sadness of his death and get ready to write me a new story. Because I will be here to read and review it.
Your ever so loyal fan,
Lovey_reader

Wow, I've read this all the way through in a few hours and I love it! Severus is my favourite character, and reading this has made my insides go gooey! :D

Oh I kinda got excited there for a moment. I thought that Lucius was going to join in. That would have been yummy. Anyways... I didn't understand why Lucius kept saying Nagini? Seems every time he used cruciatus he said Nagini. Was he calling for her? Was that some type of curse?
I did however LOVE, LOVE the ending. By the way just how much of this potion did he make? He seems to made it by the litres and be the only one drinking it.
I can't wait until next time.

Uh rip out my heart why don't you