Chapter 18.
Little angsty at first, but I suppose a logical development and then sexy as hell. Beautiful ending of the chapter :)
Happy Fox xx
Chapter 20.
Very hot, so hot, that I'm getting jealous.
And I'm glad to see I was right about the curse :-) It's an interesting turn of events. I'm dying to see what's next and if people will notice the difference in their looks...
Curious Fox xx
Chapter 22.
Lucius (sexy devil) is plotting something. I simply know it, Lucius is not the one to leave things alone... and I don't think such a good writer as you, would introduce him for nothing. There is something disturbing coming our way...
Anxious Fox xx
The book! Ohh, what a wonderful idea!!! And they will have to fuck a lot more... yum!
Excited Fox xx
Chapter 24.
Levitating cristalline beads -that sounds beautiful. Actually the whole scene 'looks' wonderful, so multi-sensuous. I love it.
And then 'sea anemone' -lovely
'Fucking Slytherin tribute' -brilliant and exactly what it was :)
Dreamy Fox xx
Ohh Desert!
Chapter 3.
It's so exciting! Especially the bit on the ladder. You are unbelievable, your scenes are so full of different emotions, sometimes very funny, sometimes I go "OMG can't believe this just happened" , sometimes I cringe and the rest is steaming hot.
Fox xx
Oh my, that was spectacular.
I have a feeling that Hermione and Snape will be attacking each other for a while.
Fox xx
Chapter 5.
I have only one thing to say: Can I pleeease have Snape, pleeeease!!! I want to be "plundered relentlessly throughout the night"...
Fox xx
Chapter 6.
I feel sorry for Snape... poor thing didn't notice the difference between Old Hermione and Hermione The Survivor. Big mistake, huge ;-)
Fox xx
Chapter 7.
Exciting -obviously, but scary...
Fox xx