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Why do I have a feeling this will be the end of them trying to one-up each other? Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Wow. In one moment you have me rolling with the visual descriptions and devious machinations of these characters, and in the next horrified for both of them. felt especially sorry for Poppy. After everything she's helped him through, and he almost hurt her - I cannot say the Hermione deserves what she gets, but it's one thing to do something in private and another to humiliate him in front of everyone. I'm a little confused - Snape doesn't remember what he's doing after the fact? Or is it like a conscious transition when the quickening abates, and he remembers, but it's like a compulsion that was over him, before? Very, very hot but also insidious. Looking forward to updates, you've got me on the edge of my seat!

Wow, great chapter! Please eep writing and update soon!

Oh that was nasty, naughty Hermione. Let's hope Snape forgives her and learns a little tenderness as well.

HA! I knew I recognised those ribbons!!!
Love the story :D

I must say up till fifth chapter, I wasn't entirely sure if I liked this story. You've written it very well, and it's a compelling read, but the power play wasn't something I was comfortable with. The last two chapters, though, made me enjoy it quite a lot. I will gladly read further chapters, and commend you on the command (pun unintended) you have over the way you spin the story.

Fabuloso! Muy bien! Or something heh! Very, very good, imaginative, original - you like Teddy, you say? SHE, much like Snape, is a Virtuoso in the realm of fanfic, as I'm sure you've noticed. You have good taste. I love this revenge thing, taken to a whole new level. Goddess, what they hell are they gonna do, keep trying to one up one another? REally looking forward to more! Yikes!

Love it! Can't wait for more!

That was INSANELY hot. I can't wait to read more.